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A jam submission

Donut WholesView game page

For Brackeys Game Jam 2020.1!
Submitted by Charlie Patton — 7 hours, 19 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Theme#84.1924.192
Fun#513.8083.808
Innovation#613.5773.577
Game Design#823.6923.692
Overall#933.5383.538
Graphics#1853.3853.385
Audio#3182.5772.577

Ranked from 26 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted(+1)

Well done with the gameplay, clear visuals, writing and levels!

Criticisms:

The walls halted the player in every direction but away from them, which was very annoying and resulted in most of my deaths.

The character seemed to keep going too long after I let go of the movement button, which had a negative effect on game feel.

Submitted(+1)

Very fun, nice game

Submitted(+1)

The game's really fun, 

The narrative is very funny. I really like the idea that the people we help are our enemies at first. the universe is simple but pleasing to the eye and the story. 

Very good work! 

Submitted(+1)

The overall game concept is interesting. It's really fun to fill the hole of a doughnut.

But the sound effect for dialogues is a little too loud, since you also have a strong background music.

And I do believe it would be better if the character can be smaller, because it even receives damage when collides with enemies.

Also, I would recommend let player have a choice to skip the dialogue.

Submitted(+1)

i really like the idea of the game, and the story was really fun :D

i LOVED  the ending ;)

a suggestion: maybe changing the cursor to another would be prefect because it blends with the background and makes it harder to aim!

maybe change the short music loops for longer ones because it is a bit annoying.

Overall it is a great game!! :)

we would love you to check out our game, and give us a rate :)

https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-3/rate/574177

Developer(+1)

I really enjoyed your game! Thanks for checking ours out as well!

Submitted
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Developer

Thanks so much for playing! I'm glad you liked it so much!

Submitted(+1)

Fun,  and different from most ideas on here.

Submitted(+1)

Very interesting game. You've made a lots content in the game. The level 14 is a bit difficult. Nice job. The bgm are a little bit short and repeat. Would be great with longer songs.

Submitted

Very fun and challenging game. Problem that I faced was that I couldn't see cursor on white background.

Submitted

wow!! Well done!

Submitted
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Developer

Glad you liked it! A tutorial likely would've been in the cards if I'd had more time, but thanks for the suggestion!

Submitted(+1)

Funny story, brilliant game!

Submitted(+1)

I like that you put a heavy emphasis on story! Also matching the right donut holes to the right donut was a pleasant surprise mechanic. Your music was a little intense for a game about donuts. Great job!

Developer

Glad you liked it! The music was a little rushed so I didn't quite have time to tone it down as much as I liked hahaha! Hopefully next time I'll remember to spend some more time on audio

Submitted

The game is really funny i enjoyed it haha,especially the pun,but i ran into problems sometimes ex:the enemy sometimes get stuck and its hard to see where you are aiming because there is no cursor,also i recommend making your game into webGL format,making it faster to play.

Developer

Glad you liked it! The cursor’s something I hadn’t thought of until just  after submitting sadly. I was going to make it WebGL but I had never done it before, and because I was running out of time, I decided to just go with standard builds rather than risk experimenting. Thanks for playing!

Submitted(+1)

Damn those puns, I loved the game art style and everything incorporated in this game! Well done guys

Developer

Thanks so much! Really glad you enjoyed!

Submitted

The art, music and dialogues create a very fun and cute game. The concept is good and the gameplay seems to by very polished. In my opinion some levels are too difficult because of the small stage.

Great Game!!

Submitted

Nice game I enjoyed

Submitted

A really fun game, but I ran into some problems. First of all, it's hard to see where you're aiming, having some custom cursor that doesn't blend in with the background would help. And at one point I threw a center out of the map when standing near the top of it.

Developer(+1)

Thanks for the feedback! A cursor probably would have helped, I definitely should have invested more time into that specifically. Thanks for playing!

Submitted

Very nice game! Love the concept and the music, found the gameplay a little confusing at first but go used to it. Very fun!

Submitted(+1)

Genius idea! Love the cute cartoon-ish art also, and the endless puns were priceless. :D Well done!

Developer(+1)

Really glad you liked it! Thanks a lot for playing!

Submitted

You're very welcome! :D Also I would really appreciate it if you played and rated my game as well. Thanks in advance!

Developer(+1)

I just did, and it was awesome! Great job!

Submitted(+1)

Thanks! :D

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