I smell potential, and I can see that it was made with care, but I still think it would be a lot easier if I could see a magnification of the screen. It was hard to spot some of the ladders. I also think the dragon mechanic is a bit random, and therefore unfair. Maybe you could give it a pattern (or does it already have a pattern?)

Really great work! Single-room Metroidvania was one of my first ideas for the theme, but I quickly decided there was no way I could make it work. Kudos on doing what I couldn't! :) My main complaint is that death is a bit too punishing. I also didn't really understand how the electric trap thingies work. I got hit by them a bunch of times without anything actually happening and then at some point later one of them killed me. I guess they do some amount of damage that's less than your full HP? But without an HP indicator, it just seemed a bit random. (Unless there was a message at the bottom of the screen. I kept missing those. :D)

I loved this game! :D Really fun to figure out the mechanics and find all the secrets! It was very satisfying to find the final clues and see both possible endings!

A few small things bothered me. The platforms were a little hard to see on the far right and left sides, and it was a little frustrating to keep missing those. The bomb and key mechanics confused me; at first I didn't realize that I had unlimited bombs and unlimited keys after getting the initial one. It also felt like the bomb took a long time to explode, I wasn't sure if I was supposed to light it with the torch or initiate the explosion in some way.

Finally finished it. The first time I played it, it bugged out after a few deaths. But after restarting it, I was able to collect everything and beat the level.

No idea what you mean with multiple endings. Either the dragon kills you or you get to him with the egg.

You succeeded in what you set out to accomplish, but I feel like fundamental aspects of the concept itself is flawed. I love metroidvanias, and I appreciate what you were trying to do, but everything was so zoomed out, I could hardly tell where I could go, let alone where I was supposed to. Once again, I see where you were going with it, but I assume the time constraints took their tole. On the upside, it was very original!

I liked it. For only one screen, there is a lot of exploration and even backtracking involved. This puts this game apart from a lot of the other "one screen" games I have seen so far. I think the only issue I have with this game is visibility. Because everything is very dark ladders, doors and even the torch item blend right in with the rest the environment. As a suggestion, I think starting with the the game with the torch might solve most of these problems.

I liked the theme and progression, but the 3D display and the darkness (even with the torch) made it really hard to see. Especially some of the platforms: I just had to jump around by feel because they weren't quite where they looked like they were? But maybe that was just bugs? At one point in the bottom center my character ended up mostly behind the wall, so you could just see some ghostly bits poking through. And the dragon stopped flying down and flaming after a while (maybe after I died and restarted one time?): was that intentional?

At the beginning it took me quite a while to figure out what to do: I didn't see my character on the left. Some sort of effect to point that out would be nice (maybe the camera zooms in there for a second, or there are some particles that start on the whole screen and zoom to your character, or a flashing arrow or something?).

I also didn't pick up the torch until I had explored every other area that was accessible at the very beginning because it looked like a spiky pile of pulsating darkness so I assumed it was an enemy.

Some feedback about your character's health (you have three health, right?) would be good.

I liked how in the early game there was always an easy way to get out of the way of the dragon's fire but then it got harder (like the right tower).

The platforming was a little floaty, and the friction on the sides of platforms was annoying (you can't just hold sideways and jump because pushing into the platform makes you not jump as high).

Overall it was good!

Couldn't figure out how to beat it once I got up to the dragon, but a super cool game nonetheless :)

All on one screen makes it a little hard to see, but it's because there's so much there. Good progression. Had a few things I couldn't figure out, but I think that's more on me than on the game.