Very professionally put-together, well-laid out, and great writing! It has all the info we need to run it, too. Great job!

Very well laid out. I like the borders you used on the pages and the map illustrations were all useful.

I like the straight-forward way you introduced the adventure and presented hooks to get things started.

It took me quite a while to figure out the numbers on the map, I think part of that was having numbered tables directly above the maps - it might be helpful to place a numbered list of the locations directly above the map and to increase the prominence of the location numbers in the top-right of their respective pages.

I like how you presented the characters in a table, it might be interesting for a GM to roll on it to switch things up with the names and personalities.

All of the Jungle Herbs and Magical Items and Treasures were interesting and you did a good job keeping the locations varied. The Amethyst Slime stood out as a really useful monster, great to throw at a spell caster heavy party.

You managed to pack so much into so few pages—very impressive. Good stuff!

Fun stuff! Adventure is well-written, readable and clearly laid out, the hex crawl is fun and the different NPCs and groups on the island add a lot of character. This would be a great addition to nautical campaigns!

Looks like a neat piratical hexcrawl for my players' characters to wash up on. The location descriptions are a little wordy for running on the fly, but they're well-written and interesting to read.

I love wilderness survival, treasure hunting and lucasarts adventure games and the monkey island soundtrack was bumping in my subconscious while reading this.

I enjoyed the variety of encounter tables and the need to find mundane items like an anchor to repair a ship. My homebrew setting includes tropical islands, so this will make a fine addition of locations the PCs to run ashore into nasty rocks and have to find a new way off the island.

A well-done pirate/tropical island adventure. Lots of good content here that could probably fill a couple of sessions, but I did think the descriptions were a bit too verbose, at times.

I love the pirate vibe and I thought you made great decisions with the layout. I'd like to play this at my table!

I liked the layout.  The tiny maps are great and add a lot of value.  I like the idea of the treasure maps and they can probably be expanded.