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Super cool.  I love that your tested out the tables,  Makes me happy.

What a monster.  Really creeped me out.

I'm getting total Secret of Nimh vibes.  This is so good.

First published adventure! Great job.  The hand drawn map is and locations are easy to follow.  The Stair Men are just crazy. Love it.

I'm excited to play this.  I'd love to see more comprehensive solo play rules for Knave.  But i think this adventure can be compatible with any solo system.  Very cool.

The art and writing just sucks you into the world.  Wonderful job!

Wow just the blurb drew me into this one.  It looks really fun to play almost like a board game.  Great job!

Nice.  I'm glad you enjoyed it. 

Thanks a bunch.  I know that for a lot of people this isn't their thing but I tried to make it a good read.

Thank you so much.  That was part of idea. I wanted to make something that could be played quickly with kids or newcomers to the hobby.

Great layout and easy to pick up.  Well done.

Very easy to use dungeon crawl. I like the size descriptions for each room.

Its as if Willy Wonka was selling NFTs.  Great idea. 

Super fun.  Great art and layout.  I appreciate the in pdf links.

Dwark Names: Roll 1d100. That’s its name
I love it!  Now I can call people dwarks and chuckle to myself.

This is a good one.  I love the initiate or interloper mechanic.  Its simple but makes absolute sense in the story.  Well done. One of my faves.

I like the setting a bunch.  The art style brings you into it.  The map is great.  I think that moving some things around in the layout would add to usability.  Good Job!

Sorry i couldn't download.  Please repost soon.

This is like a 4 in one book. Wow so much in here.  I think this is a great entry.

Hey I figured it out.  Really awesome job. The layout is professional and I love the cut out Bog lurker minis.  The map is so well done.  Great job!

Very clear writing.  Easy to use.  I really like how you used that picture on the theater description.

I like the book table.  Great art.  Great job. 

Clear layout.  Easy to use.  I love frogs as monsters.

This is great, I love the layout and art.  There is so much here.  Interesting characters and monster.  Well done.

I like the narrative style in the instructions.  Also I that cockatrice are actually just chickens.

Good job.

I like the narrative style in the instructions.  Also I that cockatrice are actually just chickens.

Good job.

Yeah I was following the Mad magazine rule.

Too bad I tried to get your submission a few times.  But Itch wont let me.

Thanks a bunch!

Great job. Very interesting subject and the oath tables are fun.  Great for a one shot.

Love this. Very intersting to read.  I like the npc info and the setting is just so cool. I'd up the contrast on the pink pages though for readability.

Very nice map. Clear easy to use.  I like the changing nature of the machine. Good job.

Very cool map.  Easy to run.  I like that its all there including stat blocks.

This is a great resource for a ship.  Nice job basically can fit into lots of adventures.

Yeah maybe the names might be too close to the real deal.  Thanks!

Wow that's a big dungeon! Really digging the art.  

The map is clear and usable.  The rooms look good.  I like that you have stat blocks.  I think a better layout maybe 2 column would help readability.

Nice.  Mutation generator is cool. The layout and design is well done.  I love the colors.  This is a fun adventure.  I loved the pic of the poor beekeeper with a giant stinger through their chest.

Very cool way to make a maze.  I did a similar thing in my first adventure where the players go through a corn maze. As an extension, I think it would be cool to  have some charts to roll some rooms.

I'm glad you liked the read.  I really wanted to have the voice of some of the old Sesame Street books I read as a kid.