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Inferno's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Flow & Clarity | #4 | 4.115 | 4.115 |
Overall | #19 | 3.679 | 3.679 |
Concepts & Originality | #32 | 3.731 | 3.731 |
Adherence to Theme | #41 | 3.192 | 3.192 |
Ranked from 26 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I like your writing style.
And I've always got a soft spot for the elves <LOL>
Shame about the elves tho. Pesky hippies ruining a good thing. Funny take on a classic idea and some fun imagery!
The story was interesting and evocative, but it definitely felt like it was written to be a 40k story, rather than taking place in the OPR setting. Though, I think that could be largely fixed by changing some wording/minor details (Promethium, Hellhounds, etc).
This story was awesome. Really liked the changing of perspective with each passing of a character.
Probably one of the few stories I'd rate 5/5 for flow. Very neatly done!
Hot stuff! Nice opening and movement to action 👍
great story! Tight and clean. Well told!