I dig it. Valiant last stand against an unknown and apparently unstoppable foe. It read very well and captured a moment excellently.

Sisters getting a lot of love during this jam, I think this would be the lead for a mini-anthology from what I’ve read so far!

thats a story i like,rather meet death in combat than in starvation
let us invite the enemy to a warmt embrace of our guns

This was a clever twist on the theme of 'let them in'; with that theme my mind immediately goes to mercy and/or hard descisions, and I liked what you did with the idea.

Love the whole vibe of this piece, it's a really good look on the Battle Sisters and I loved the ending lines!