beware the orc training videos, that’s classic 👍

The overall message is great, though a bit heavy-handed in the third column.

Had a great time with this one!

I think you did a really good job with pacing this one - it felt like the perfect amount of content for the format. I do think that a lot of the exposition wound up being a bit unnecessary (like some of the opening paragraph, and the long one in the second column), and I think I'd have rather seen that word count spent on more dialogue. The dialogue (and positioning the orc as the knowledgable, enlightened one) was a highlight of the story to me, and I'd have liked to see more of the setting details come out organically in it. 

She Who Howls is also a great spaceship name and I'm definitely stealing it.

I liked it, was a fun read! Felt like the exclamation marks were a bit over used, but other wise no notes! (disregard the fact that I use an exclamation mark whenever possible in this comment)

I liked it, was a fun read! Felt like the exclamation marks were a bit over used, but other wise no notes! (disregard the fact that I use an exclamation mark whenever possible in this comment)

'Orc and stone!'

'You spelled rock wrong.'

'Nah, I didn't.'

At last, an Orc helps something else and doesn't get betrayed for their effort. Thanks.

Good stuff. I really liked the orc showing up to save the day--and the gentle chastisement that followed! I wonder if the irony might have been stronger if you introduced the anti-orc prejudice sooner? Great story, though, and definitely an unlikely alliance!

Lovely stuff, really liked the pacing as the fight got underway. I liked the wholesome life lesson learned by Girra, especially after refering to the Radiance Cascade lore as a cool contrasting touchstone, great contrast to the grimdark backdrop.

Lovely stuff, really liked the pacing as the fight got underway. I liked the wholesome life lesson learned by Girra, especially after refering to the Radiance Cascade lore as a cool contrasting touchstone, great contrast to the grimdark backdrop.