Hey... it sounds childishly dreamy. I like it!!! 1!
Thanks for the positive 3 minutes)
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Quality | #391 | 3.263 | 3.263 |
Correlation to theme | #446 | 3.158 | 3.158 |
Composition | #473 | 3.053 | 3.053 |
Overall | #474 | 3.126 | 3.126 |
Creativity | #474 | 3.158 | 3.158 |
Impression | #478 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Description
- One orchestral track
- Composed in Ableton Live 11 Standard
Message from the artist
This is my first jam! Thank you for listening <3 comments and guidance are always appreciated!
Theme
How does it fit the theme?
This track's nostalgic feeling can be tied to both themes. The sound design and selection capture the underwater feeling. The orchestral style brings out personal feelings of joy and intimate celebration that are apparent in the picture between the girl and motherly figure. The girl in the picture is inside her own world and that is what I captured.
Link(s) of the submission on streaming services
https://soundcloud.com/mitchpatchett/inside-my-world-jam-submission1
Number of tracks1
Genre
Soundtrack use permission
For game jams only
Hey... it sounds childishly dreamy. I like it!!! 1!
Thanks for the positive 3 minutes)
Creative song, solid composition and mixing. I really liked the instruments you chose and the rhythm. Nice job and good luck!
Interesting choice of voicings and patches! It works well and gives me some floating kind of vibes. Nice minimalistic percussion throughout, just enough to drive the track forward. The shift in rhythm around the 1:30 mark was really nice, especially while keeping the main synth consistent but just changing the pattern slightly. Use of orchestral elements throughout is well done and layered nicely - some good uses of different articulations.
Fun listen, nice and pensive. Good job with the arrangement! :)
I like the vibes, it certanly captures that "joyful child playing in their own world" aspect. The composition is good, but I do think it gets repetitive at some point, specially percussion-wise, which could use some variation. The same beat being for 3 minutes in the song makes it kinda stale. Even then, it's still a quite enjoyable listen. The strings are satisfying to hear, and the melody in general is pleasant. Good job!
I think it is an overall great track. I enjoyed it's rhythm. I feel like the nostalgia could have been more pronounced; from my experience, the feeling often stems from the melody. Underwater songs also usually have lower frequencies. Either way, I think the track was made with care, just a little off the theme.
I think it got a little bit repetitive but overall it was quite nice.
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