Judge feedback

Judge feedback is anonymous.

• GDD: The logo on the document certainly gives a good first impression. Very final fantasy-like. It is good to included images of the enemies, characters and UI of the game, but does it have to be BIG images of them? A good suggestion would be that making the image a little bit smaller while having text next to it than below the image. That way the reader can see the image and read the text at the same time; making it easier to progress the info. Good to included an image of dice description to explain of how the dice works, but keep in mind that majority of the readers are mostly in english-speaking regions and having text of dice description in another language would make it harder to understand. That being said, I do noticed that you have corrected this for some images below of the dice description, which is somewhere good, so I suspected the images that was in another language was a placeholder but didnt managed to update to english in time. What I would love to see the document to being improved upon is some sort of development timeline, so the reader can get a sense of the game's state and perhaps more text in depth of the art design. Like why pixel art and this specified style of art and different mock up designs and different results that leads down the route of the art style. Also I am not sure how mortal shell image tied into the document when it has nothing to do with the game's style and game direction? Perhaps for inspirations, if so, you should have a section for inspirations and put it there. Game: The intro is good. The movement controls are good, but I think it would make it easier if it was like better visible icon for interacting (sometimes one in the game blended into the wall too good) and perhaps an tutorial for movement and interacting. The combat 100% need a tutorial, but also need to be simplified so the execution works better in each phases of the combat. It took me awhile to realized that I had to doubleclick on my RPG group when they can attack and when they can heal themselves. Honestly the art style and gameplay is impressive, but it doesnt really fits the theme of "you are the weapon". Lorewise, I can get behind of the idea of the necromancer taking over the minds of the bodies and making them like "weapons" thus the necromancer become the weapon of the RPG group but gameplay-wise it feels more like a classic RPG dungeon crawler than like the theme itself. It feels less of like I (the player) are the weapon and more like a question of "are the bodies of group a weapon when they are being mindcontrolled by a necromancer?" So perhaps included some unique abilities from the necromancer that makes it easier for the player to see who are in control of the group. For example, an skill tree that the player can choose to lean into absurd builds due to power from necromancer or perhaps making it so the necromancer revived the dead members of the group but making it slowly corrupted each death. (like a roguelike route) (also just a personal note from me; the necromancer feels more like a lich than actual necromancer. But that is just me having experience of D&D dark fantasy setting for so long.) Bugs: * NPC doesnt interacted with anything. Are there suppose to be some text? * Sometimes a monster can heal itself after death.