I liked how you put little changes around the house during the horror segment

I'm not sure if it's just me but the controls were very hard to use as my character would not walk the way I wanted them to alot of the time and my camera would randomly jerk away but technical issues aside I really loved the art and the story of the game.

I really love these kinds of story experiences and I really loved how the pill bottles turned into beer bottles when the cop lights started playing. The story overall was very encaptivating and the environment just brought it all together beautifully

overall the game was a really fun experience :D

Oh, I loved this! So much about it really stuck the landing of what I think a really short experience like this should be. The pixel art and simple 3d modeling really lends a sort of... distance, I guess, from the main characters perspective, like they're doing whatever they can to get away from what they've done. Just a wonderful little experience.

Only thing I would even potentially change is what others have mentioned, the whole idea of portraying more of the story through subtext, less... blatantly, I guess? But I still think the story here is great. Amazing job, excited to see more work for this team!

awesome story writing, nice work!

Oh, I like the vibe so much! Great style, story and experience :)
Thanks for creating it!

I liked the sounds and dialogue system very much. Overall a nice experience.

I love this game's artstyle, the simple pixel art really sells the setting. The narrative is a lot of fun, my only critique being that some aspects of it could be conveyed through subtext. The one thing I disliked was the movement and interaction system, but the awkwardness of that didn't really inhibit my enjoyment of the game. Looking forward to future projects :)

This game is great! Probably the best story entry I have played in this jam! Simple controls,  charming visuals, and right sound for every sequence. Can't wait to see what future holds. Great entry 👍🏻

I really liked the music and sounds in general in this, they set the mood wonderfully for the story. Graphics are also charming in, love that 8-bit styled 3D. I think my only gripes are with the 4-directional movement and mouse sensitivity, but I think that's engines fault and it didn't hinder my experience regardless. Good work on this ^^ 

I got nothing to say it was perfection my game doesn't even compare

Such an immersive story you guys nailed it! Really puts you in the psychological pressure the protagonist is going through.

wooow amazing visuals, how did you even pull it of with bitsy3d!? I liked the story and lenght too, good job on the sound too

Very decent attempt :)

The plot was nice; the psychological truth of it all really being what adds the horror vibe to the game.

Also, the colour theme change and the subtle details in the house are quite a thing (pill containers to beer bottles? dang..)

I also liked the poetry parts a lot.

Good job!

The moviment was a bit junky but overall really great story and setting.

Awesome game!
Idea and plot are nice, twist is really neat.
Horror atmosphere is short, but concentrate and shown principle, that say 'Worst of monsters are people'.
Poetry is amazing! =)

So far, I've played two jams that stood out in story, this is one of them. I really liked the writing A LOT. Does the protagonist really end up dying in a fire he caused in his house or is the interpretation of the fire/hell merely metaphorical? Anyways, great narrative ;]!

I liked it, the plot kind of reminds me of Layers of Fear, in that the artist (writer in this case) is haunted by the past and slowly devolves into madness as he grapples with it.

The grid-based movement was a little hard to figure out at first, but once I did, I was really drawn into the story. It's surprisingly powerful if you let the words take their time.

yo thats kinda sexual

Really good work guys! But mb a little bit too much text that kill suspense and fear