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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Adherence to Theme | #11 | 3.615 | 3.615 |
| Concepts & Originality | #26 | 3.615 | 3.615 |
| Overall | #26 | 3.474 | 3.474 |
| Flow & Clarity | #29 | 3.192 | 3.192 |
Ranked from 26 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Really neat concept, I like the characters and the premise. I think it would've worked better if the story began in the midst of the heist and the details of the plan were hinted at or inferred during the action; such a short format doesn't really leave space for a leisurely introduction.
I think there could have been more paragraph breaks for the space available, but it was a fun heist regardless. Definitely not the ending I was expecting
I think there are some really good elements here that would be suited for a longer format, just not enough word space to get into the details fully I think, but worth taking the time to expand for sure.
Loved the concept and it was well executed. As Grizlibier mentioned, I too felt like there were a few too many characters to follow in such a short time, but nevertheless, it was a great shortstory!
First of all, well done Mr;Long XD XD
Anyway, I feel like some parts are a bit repetetive regarding names. Also, there are quite a lot of characters and since we have but one page to write on, I found myself double-cheking names because I just didn't know who that was again.
Regardless of that, it's still a solid submission!
thanks! Love a big cast. Even in a short story 😅
Seconding Grizl. I reread the first few paragraphs a couple of times to make sure I understood who was who and when I was satisfied and read on, even more new names popped up. :D
A good read nevertheless.
I liked the heist angle. Fun!
Thanks!