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A jam submission

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Submission for OPR Writing Jam #11!
Submitted by hydrated02 — 4 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Concepts & Originality#14.4174.417
Adherence to Theme#14.4584.458
Overall#14.3194.319
Flow & Clarity#44.0834.083

Ranked from 24 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted

This was a fun read and very on theme. Well done!

Rats, gobbos and neither ability to follow their plans due to bad luck and meddling. This story was my definite favourite in this jam so if you win well done and if not well your story is my winner. I loved all the things going wrong as normal for gobbos and the lack of courage by ratmen when they start to die. The ending was inspired and overall a great story I read twice just to soak it all in. 

Submitted

Oh the subtle humour laced through this was the icing on the cake! Great story telling the interaction at the end was brilliant too. Great job.

Submitted

This is the best one by far

I had a lot of fun reading this one - your flow is strong and your character voices are engaging. The ending leaves me confused, though -- I'm still not 100% sure why Archedes isn't reporting the goblin sitting right in front of him.

Submitted

Goblins, rats and Space Brothers, what a perfect mix! I absolutely want more of this, I enjoyed every moment!

Submitted

It was great, I enjoyed reading about how things just weren’t going to work out for them. It could be fleshed out into something really funny I think.

Submitted

This was fantastic, it's not easy to co-ordinate two separate story arcs like that and you pulled it off perfectly.

Thoroughly enjoyed this one.

Submitted

That was fun, and a great surprise take on the theme. 

Always good to see Goblins and Rats being themselves even though it makes heisting hard sometimes. 

Great work!

Submitted

That was fun, and a great surprise take on the theme. 

Always good to see Goblins and Rats being themselves even though it makes heisting hard sometimes. 

Great work!

Submitted

That was a fun story I enjoyed it. 

Submitted

I really liked the sort of ironic take on the theme.  Nicely done.

Submitted

This one was fun

Submitted

That was a really fun story. The ending really tied it all together.