Thank you! I tried to really connect all of them with similar sounds and ideas, but still keep them somewhat different.
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I was aproud of the ticking clock motif. You're probably right about the percussion though, the first three all have percussion to some degree, but maybe there should be something more prominent.
I made everything on my synth, and it was a bit clunky to make the percussion on it. I'll try MIDI next time.
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Your tracks aren't the most flashy I've ever heard, but these are the ones I could most imagine in an actual game. A lot of these sound really proffesional if a bit quiet. These would already fit really tightly into a lot of games.
I can also hear some hollow knight inspiration in quite a few tracks including 01 and 06. Not totally, but the pianos and the some of the strings
Overall great job! I am really impressed.
Wow! Inside my world blew me away. Such a fun tune in the beginning, and I did not expect where it went next. I loved every part of it, and I did not find it incomplete one bit.
I forgot to take my pills, was also really well done. It was at times a bit hard to listen to, although I guess thats the idea with the wierd sounds and all.
Overall amazing job, dont get discouraged by not meeting your own goals. You are your own worst critic.
Hi! These tracks are extremely commendably, for their well writter piano melodies. Seriously, a lot of other submissions have lot less complicated piano patterns, and rely more on vibes.
I noticed that you often have strings in the background, whenever they get louder, they are really interesting, I think it's a shame that they stay in the background so often.
Also, on the note of orchestration, oftentimes it's advantageous to separate different instruments to their own section on the keyboard. In most cases you don't want two separate instruments playing around the same notes.
Overall incredible job! I hope to see you in next years Jam as well!
Okay... this is going in my playlist. It's amazing. I love the guitar elements. If I had to citique it, i would have to say, that for one, I think the drums overshadow the rest, especially when they first come in. Also while I love the part with the guitars, I would definately addede one more to the mix as a lead (maybe just a distorted guitar playing high A, G and B) . I felt as if the guitar part lacked a drop, and just kept on building momentum until the end. Overall though I think it's amazng, the vibe, the instruments, it definately goes hard.
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I loved the energy in this one. A standout for me were your chord changes, they fit your style well, and were reminiscent of more classical pieces like canon in D. If it had been up to me, I would have been more bold with the Marimba, put more focus on the melody, not just the chords. My favorite was the last song.
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