So,

I found some typo ( 1 currently)

Near the start when your sister come in, It create some kind of loop a bit latter on, if you choose should i have to fly with her it bring you back to the good morning. But choosing the right option make the game select the left one.

The flowery frame around the portraits is missing in the dialogue in front of the library door.

Baxter bag description as typos.

Baxter dialogue is missing it's window, reappear after looking up at older sister.

Also when loading the next part the screen turn partialy black with strange geometric motive in the upper left part.

There are some He / She missused.

The game is enjoyable, i will post more discoveries as i play trought it.

Hello, thank you very much for commenting. It's really useful that someone reports you all the bugs they've had; I'm already making a new version that I hope to release as soon as possible fixing these bugs you've found.

I'm glad you think the game is enjoyable and I apologise for any bugs you may have found in your game.

I will wait for your new reports if you wish to make them.

Best regards and thanks again.

Hi, I've just published the new version, if it's not too much to ask it would be great if next time you could take some screenshots of the text you find because I haven't found the spelling mistakes. 

I leave here the link to the notes of the last update, almost all the bugs that have been fixed were because you told me about them; thank you.

Ok, 

Playing the new build (going with the sister) 

Superficial (One P to superficial) mode

There seem to be a reocurring issue with the text box, don't know why tought. 

Everytime you use Load (after starting the game anew and only on the first use) https://imgur.com/a/ZCqCBJj this show up.

A lo-t of wor-ds got tho-se union traits in the dialogues from the train platform to the house.

When the dialogue goes to Althea pack her case, it appear twice (before Carla come back)

Butler welcome the house Fa_ade (missing the C)

Dialogue in the journal argument, Horn warning of fanny arrival apear twice

(this is just me, but the little lock could affect some players choices)

In will office, antique oil lamp, then under it oil lamp... redundancy

When talking to Eliza and asking about the writting, her stat indicate, Confianza (in the english version)

Once taken from the typer, the line for the piece of paper apear twice

typo when asked by drake outside of the room after saying you could take care of the drunk alone, Tete a Tete, and not T Te- -T  Te (same typo appear latter when your in the luncheon)

Redundancy in the stove manual

during cooking, Last sentence before Drake leave apear twice

When interacting with Drake Miss delafield apear saying thank you - it seem to appear if you do certain actions... same with fanny is it normal?

The game seem to reload a dialogue from time to time, seemingly when the set (the whole room and characters) change. Maybe it's just and engine fault, it dosent affect the gameplay otherwise.

Ok this one is a bug; went to talk to eliza, said was sorry and ok with the apology then said there are many other publisher then, surprise, Spanish text https://imgur.com/a/mHX6xBQ

The use of the world ejaculate seem to be off context, it might be a rough translation from spanish 

First time this bug appear, loaded a game and the text of the options is gone, try to see if it happened with others as it might just be current game https://imgur.com/a/hgvhWjo

O cristina portrait is taken instead of drake (i wonder if the appearing side tab showing affection and such also suffer from this) https://imgur.com/a/xtpP2Wc

after accepting to go to the aunty show - https://imgur.com/a/GDw6kX2

frame in spanish - https://imgur.com/a/hSetIgQ

missing dialogue in this choice (right after go back to sleep) - https://imgur.com/a/WN5tmkl , then chosed right and the text was invisible until do you know what mr drake

Hi, thanks again for doing this bug detection work, it's really helpful.

I don't know why you get an error window every time you use Load, it doesn't happen to me, but I'm trying to talk to the developers of Visual Novel Maker engine to solve it. They don't usually answer, the program is very abandoned and outdated, so I don't know if I can fix this.

I'll publish the new version as soon as possible, although with what you have advanced in the story I don't think it's worth to start again from scratch (although I could also give you a special copy of the game for you with a menu to select the chapter you want). 

Once again thank you very much for the work you are doing, I hope you are enjoying the project.

Best regards.

Lady cass chapter, the encounter with clara, no dialogue box background. (seem like the others times, some kind of software related issue)

When chatting with the fives the time you reach night. There is someone to draw picture when there is no illustration

BUG - https://imgur.com/a/5KrmRY4 once this line is done the game loop back to when you enter the room and the 5 are cleaning the table, using different in between lead to the same result :(

From my current reading there is quite a lot of word that suffered from the - treatement,Like so; disa-pointed Showm-anship

Also a good read of the text in english could fix all the He / She typos.

I'll wait for a fix to continue the game :)

Hi, thanks again for your review work. I've just released the new version of the game but there are a few things I wanted to comment on. 

There are some minor errors that I have been unable to find (like the "ejaculate ") or things (like the redundancy in the cooker manual) that I have not understood well and that I have left for later.  

As for the errors concerning hyphens within words, many of them are due to the fact that in the original novel there was a line break and the word was cut off. However, there are also some that are written this way by the author and may have to do with the way of writing of that time (I leave you the link with an example: ' By-the-by,'). I have updated a lot of things in the original text to make it more understandable; maybe this has to be one of those things. 

I have also noticed that some spelling mistakes have to do with the fact that the typography I made is missing letters in other languages; that's why, for example, the words "tête-à-tête" didn't appear correctly. 

By the way, you asked me if it's normal that Miss Delafield's portrait appears when she's not present; no, it's a bug that I've just discovered happens from time to time and that I have to fix every time it appears, if you find more don't hesitate to let me know. 

Finally I wanted to ask you again (since you are in the middle of the story) if you don't want me to give you a copy of the game that leaves you in the chapter you are in (even if your decisions are not saved). 

Best regards and thanks again. 

New version now available.

Hi

Well the ejaculate appear at 2 places, One is - https://imgur.com/a/w2sFOjG

The oven manual as text that repeat itself in the same phrase. Like this exemple this exemple.

Thanks for the offer but i got a lot of saves (filled more then half the slots alredy, lol), but curiosity, how many chapter are there / who can we date ? (if not a spoiler)

not in the new build but: https://imgur.com/a/zLHbRVc if it can help i was trying to open the setting from the gear (top right) menu.

Have a good day/night.

Hello!

Regarding the word "ejaculation" indeed I have found them; in fact I have found 4 but they are all from the original novel; should I change it? does it sound too bad in English? tell me your opinion please. Here is the first original sentence:

"To think that this is the last evening we shall ever sit in this jolly old room!' says Thomas, setting down his teacup, and casting an eye irrepressibly jovial even while uttering this pensive ejaculation along the emptied bookshelves."  (page 54 - Dear Faustina)

In the oven manual indeed the text that is repeated "chimney" in the same sentence in the English version; I hadn't noticed. 

I will post the fixes tomorrow along with other small errors.

How many chapters are there? I imagine the question is how many chapters can you have left to play. From what you have told me I guess you are about half way through (or maybe further).I sent you a graphic with one of the routes you can follow from where you are to finish the game (a chapter can change a lot depending on your decisions and a final chapter can have several endings depending on the options you choose).

I have checked the new version (day 13) and it doesn't take me to a 404. Maybe it has been fixed or you loaded an old file? Can you tell me when this error occurs if it happens again? 

You play on Windows right?

When you sent me the message I had already been awake for 4 hours, I guess you were about to go to sleep.

Good night.

The word ejaculation mean cumming, as in sex. Maybe it's just me but could another word be used ? i would have to look at the spanish version before suggesting a change for the word as context is important.

Thanks :D will go rabid on the paths to the carrots ;)

Yes window 10, laptop.

Have a good day.

On latest build, i went an open the log.. some of the text said is missing and it always start at the begining of the game (not really a bug) but once closed it did this - https://imgur.com/a/OOmuraP until the story reached a choice, then it disapeared.

The original novel is in English and I translated it into Spanish. My translation was:

"¡Pensar que esta es la última noche que vamos a estar en esta antigua y alegre habitación!" - dice Edward sirviéndose una taza de té, y echando un ojo a largo de las estanterías vacías.  

 Which in turn could be translated as:

"To think that this is the last night we are going to be in this jolly old room!" - Edward says, pouring himself a cup of tea, and casting an eye along the empty bookshelves.  

What do you think?

With regard to the error;  It's strange, I've checked several times and it doesn't happen to me, have you loaded a game from a previous version or something like that?

And yes, the time change is a nuisance.

Work better. 

The cressida bug is still present (want my save file?) She apeared when Drake drop the maid on the bed.

Allow it to grow is repeated - https://imgur.com/a/FZnx5SE

is it just me, when you explain about Elize case, she still get dismissed.

Thanks for the report; don't worry, I've already found the bug. As I said, this bug appears at certain times just after making a decision; unfortunately it's not something I can fix globally, I have to do it every time it comes up and it doesn't always appear

o a legacy bug, it happen.

Typo - after the dialogue with the lady - https://imgur.com/a/0446jGn (nothing major)

And the game still loop at the party (same as last build save file) https://1drv.ms/u/s!ArzAiyYSqqWsqk4_CmQ_kRRpnrGD?e=XFBeyu hope it help figuring out what is happening. 

Hello again,

I don't know what exactly you mean by "legacy bug", do you mean a bug that happens after the dialogue with the lady? I've been checking and I don't have a bug at this point (the image doesn't seem to have any bug either). Maybe I spend too much time in front of the computer screen and I'm not thinking clearly anymore. Can you describe what's going on?

As for the looping party bug; I can't get it to happen to me; it must be a series of specific decisions, I'll keep looking into it. 

As for the save game; YES, it would be very useful, but how did you get it? Where are these saved games stored, I thought they were not accessible to the user, where should I put the one you gave me?

Thanks for everything again, you are my guardian angel.

Ok,

The term legacy is sometime used to refer to bugs that are part of the engine and as such will always occur within a specific set of circumstances.

For the save, 

Go to your C;/ drive (or whatever you named it)

Select the USER folder

Select YOU (the name you gave yourself)

In the folder options (if on win 10) in the top bar, open the view options and select the, Show masked / Hidden folder (important step)

AppData folder is now visible (this little folder is really usefull)

Inside there are 3 folder; Local, Local Low and Roaming

Open Local and inside of it you will find a folder named: Dear Althea Final

Select user data, then Default

In this one look for the file type - VNDATA

One is the save the other is the save header (i only send you the save if you also need the header let me know)

It is also how one can delete the saves he curently as.

That's where their hidding ;)

There, I found it; sorry for wasting your time, I'll see if I can load your save game.

It doesn't appear even when I create a "SaveGame_8_Header" by hand. Can you send me both files?

If you want I can share a drive folder for it.

This save game is to check that there is an error (a loop) during the tea party isn't it?

By the way, I think that by deleting my comments I also deleted some of your comments in reply to me, sorry for the mistake.

Hello again, these words are spelling corrections? 

To which part do the words belong?

Yes, if it's not too much trouble can you pass me the saved files and tell me what bug each one suffers from. That would be super useful, thank you very much.

nope, i'm on a diferent pc. Ho well maybe it's my normal luck with softwares

When felicating Eliza

in the secret menu

Same ''bug'' when loading a save game, I'm going to look into this more while I continue to fix other bugs.

I'm glad you've seen the fixes and think the game is cleaner, in large part, thanks to you. Are you liking the game?

Regarding the small suggestion; since the first day I published the game, I created a post regarding known issues with the engine (Visual Novel Maker) to help solve the doubts. You can see it as a fixed post in the Steam or Ithc.io forum:

https://itch.io/t/2041057/about-bugs?before=5#post-5751517

Still, after your suggestion, I've added some more points and I've put the information of all updates.

I'm glad you got to see three endings, were they satisfactory?

Disable the shortcut to hide the text box? I don't know what that shortcut is or what it's for, can you give me more info?

Now I'm going to look for the bug where one of the locks stays for the whole scene. And I will also fix the problems in the text you pointed out.

I see you have tried the secret menu, what did you get?