very nice experience! so beautiful music!
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Audio | #245 | 3.452 | 3.452 |
| Theme | #433 | 3.581 | 3.581 |
| Innovation | #586 | 3.129 | 3.129 |
| Overall | #599 | 3.188 | 3.188 |
| Game Design | #601 | 3.194 | 3.194 |
| Fun | #808 | 2.935 | 2.935 |
| Graphics | #935 | 2.839 | 2.839 |
Ranked from 31 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
In what way does your game fit the theme?
Story
Did you write all the code yourself and made all the assets from scratch?
Yes
Comments
Very sweet and evocative narrative, I'm amazed you managed to breath so much life into a text-based game! The soft music definitely did help build the mood as well.
I would suggest spending some more time on the UI experience, especially as a wholly UI-based game. Formatting the text more centrally with the choices appearing in a different font, perhaps slightly after the text appeared could have added a lot to the eperience.
There's also, of course, many more optons such as adding some basic sound effects to mark specific moments in the narrative or using some interesting text formatting or typing-out effects to help build the suspense and power of certain moments.
But that said the narrative was strong making the experience really enjoyable!
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Silence and DarknessHey, Amazing story. Graphics are cool. Audio is fucking genius, my congratulations <3
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Noit AdventureRelaxing music, interesting idea with the text adventure game. I felt like there was too many words and that they were too small. The story was very good!
Please rate my game: https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-5/rate/928675
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Square-MateReally wish I comforted the dad but this was a fun adventure, it was cool to immersive myself in this story
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Through the Closet DoorI feel like the interaction and gameplay in this holds it back. It feels boring if you just click on 1 or 2 to decide. If you added something like a fight scene with the demon, and or have the player press a button quickly to eat the cereal, then the game would be great. Great story though!
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Bag-A-WallI Like the story, I did not expect myself to enjoy this since I'm not into reading.
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The mage and The droneawesome! i love how the demons come out of nowhere. made the game lively :D
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Critically EndangeredThe beginning of the story is nice and slow, but the demon just like others had said came out of no where. Kinda shocked to see that kind of development, and the choices the player chooses mostly will be base on their age. Nonetheless is a fun little experiences, luck to your future endeavor.
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League of HeroesIt was a fun little experience, altough the demon really hit me out of nowhere. (: One thing to improve is to maybe add some images at some points in the story, to visualize it better. But overall nice jam submission, keep it up!
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After DeathI really like how calm the game is and how you have to be something else
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Don't Fall Back betaReally liked the approach. A calm and relaxing experience like reading a book.
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Lost in the forest
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