A quite pleasant entry! Here are my complete feedback:

* Positive points
- Nice graphics, simple but efficient

- The LD is quite interesting and challenging

- The audio is good

* Negative points
- The starting dialogue was a bit a long, I wanted to play sooner

- The gameplay is quite too quick, indeed, the character is too fast, so sometimes I felt or hit something by accident

- A blocking bug, where I felt under the ground, in fact, I jump to another scene and at the same time I fell in a hole + I tried to jump again quickly => The bug was triggered.

Overall good job!

I liked the lights and graphics. The way particles come out when you jump is really nice. My suggestion: add music. I bet that with the right music track and these lights, the feel of the game would be completely achieved.

Pretty fun game! I think you shouldn't make platforming sections between two "scenes", the camera transitions can throw you off guard. Other than that, good job!

Cool game and especially graphics. Very minimalist, I like it.

Yes the idea is good to gathering light. But feel a bit too much intro to read at first and dont know why somehow get stuck at 5th or 6th scene? is a bug or? 

was fun, but the bloom was a bit overkill. It would probably be better if you made the hwole scene darker, so getting brighter actually helps you

Excelent game for a three days project!! Liked the effects, the Storytelling and the sounds! Great Job!!
Let me ask, ou used Dinamic Lights 2d to make the light effects? If yes, how did you build it to  WebGL ?? When I tried everything messed up, so I needed to post it as a Windows Version. 
Would really appreciate it if you take a look at my project :)