Looked and sounded great, with a shocking twist at the end

I wish it was a little more clear on the gameplay parts when input is needed. The graphics and presentation is really good. It is more of a visual novel type experience and for that it is good. Outside some small spelling mistakes, it does happen, it's good.

This game is sweet very complete how did you do this in 9 days nice work

That was cool! The story was fun, and the script is pretty good. It just needs a little proofreading. The menu navigation in the 2nd chapter was a cool twist on the visual novel format.

I really like the art! It has a soft and somber appearance.

The music has a great atmosphere to it. Although, it is mixed a bit loud; when combined with the other sounds, the audio sometimes peaks above -0.0 dB.

Fantastic! Great work!

An impressive game with a lot of charm. The gameplay is smooth and the design is excellent. The game’s narrative is compelling and well-written. More audio variety would enrich the atmosphere.

Enjoyed playing the story :D

well made !

Great storyline, I liked the rugged graphics and the music was so nice.
Well done <3

I haven't played every games on Jam, but maybe this is most impressive creation.
After I played this. I feel like when I leave theater, after I saw show or movie.
I'm looking forward to next creation of you much(I followed your SNS page lol)

It was a pleasure to play! Good graphics and greats musics too!
The link to the theme is a bit ambiguous to me, but still works
Well done!

Very well done narrative.

the end got me dead

I have some rather mixed feelings about this game.

Firstly, I’ll say that the graphics and audio are spectacularly done. No complaints with that, 5/5. But my complaints have to do with the rest of the game.

This game is basically a slightly unorthodox kinetic visual novel, and that’s a decent framework, but it’s not very up-front with that. In my first playthru, I spent a great deal of time wondering when I was going to play the game. The part that gives you a menu and tells you to click everything, most egregiously, felt like a forced tutorial for some kind of menu system that you might find in a different kind of game. It put me in a mindset of tending to ignore the story you were trying to tell.

And as for that story, given that it’s tasked with carrying the whole game, I’m not really impressed, either with the story in general, or with its connection to the “unstable” theme. Firstly, the “unstable” theme… while there’s a token mention of an “unstable climate”, that’s not actually what the story is about. The actual story is about a worldwide government conspiracy where the sun is secretly a giant lightbulb in a giant room that the flat Earth is on the floor of.

And to be perfectly honest, I find that story just in general to be rather uninspired and uncompelling. How is this supposed to make me feel? Because I don’t feel anything. There’s this message that’s shoved in your face the whole time about how you shouldn’t trust the World Government, but… in the real world, there is no World Government.

Now, it’s certainly possible to make this into a compelling story. Just take a look at, for example, The Lord of the Rings, which manages to make a compelling part of its narrative the dangers of the fictional One Ring. But it doesn’t do that just by painting the One Ring as one-dimensionally obviously bad. We see both in The Hobbit and in The Lord of the Rings multiple occasions where Bilbo Baggins and Frodo Baggins are actually materially helped by the power of the One Ring. It has to be destroyed and its power cannot be trusted, but we can fully understand how attempting to use it against Sauron might seem to characters in-universe like a good idea, even without the corruption of its direct influence.

This game, by contrast, seems to pretty much be going out of its way to paint anyone in-universe who believes the World Government as stupid sheep who don’t think for themselves. Which I suppose might feel good to real-world conspiracy theorists, but doesn’t make for a particularly good story.

Good game

Your game looks stunning, and the twist ending is absolutely amazing. Great work on creating such an engaging narrative experience!

First, I want to say that I really appreciate the time you took to make all this art, as well as the effects. You did a great job and made the game feel very atmospheric. I, personally, like narrative games so this was right up my alley. I loved the story and the twist ending. You should be proud of this entry!