I so love the atmosphere you've set up in your game. Great work.

Btw check out my game and tell me your views yeah? :)

https://itch.io/jam/gmtk-2020/rate/699263

Lovely graphics and music. As has been said, it's a little to short and simple gameplay wise, but thats completely understandable in a jam. You have a good foundation to work with if you wanted to expand it.

Very atmospheric, good job. :)

Very short, very quick! I honestly didn't even understand it was over at the black screen at the end. Nice music and atmosphere, but the gameplay element was way too short and simple to me. The dialogue  scrolled by way too quickly too! I wish I could've controlled the dialogue speed myself. If this was expanded upon I think it could be a nice game, but as it stands it's way too short to be an experience.

This was too short ! And too quick.
i've barely been able to read all of it, i felt like you just throw informations at me. It's not that i had trouble understanding the story but i didn't have time to think about it, because of the auto-dialog-skip, i can't pause myself and think about. The music and the gameplay pace is low but the narration is speedy and that's almost ruining the experience.
I'm telling you this because i think the story is great (and i liked the panel concept).
But i know it's not easy to do a story based game, because that's also what i like to do (and what i've done for this jam. Except my story is less cute)

Good story and nice visuals, also loved the music. Great job!

A very nice little story! The presentation and narrative were very interesting. I only wish it were longer to flesh the story out a bit more. Well done!

Those ninja cutting onions… Great entry 💪

If this game was any more atmospheric the player would need oxygen :)

This game is amazing! i love the concept of "watching a story", please continue it after the jam, i need more of this!

Very strong presentation, it's hard to turn off the game after the intro. This game has great potential!

Maybe you could upload more screenshots, and more people will find your game through screenshots, beautiful art!

Whoa first story based game I've found, really cool game, that hookshot thou hehe I heard the "get over here"  in my head, awesome game congrats.

The story execution and atmosphere is very nice. Really loved this kind of story-driven game!

Very nice music, minimalistic but nice graphics, the levels are very cool, great game, a bit too short maybe, but it's understandable.

Really nice presentation, great music :)