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Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Originality | #606 | 3.769 | 3.769 |
Overall | #1380 | 3.269 | 3.269 |
Fun | #1626 | 3.000 | 3.000 |
Presentation | #1944 | 3.038 | 3.038 |
Ranked from 26 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does your game fit the theme?
Yes, you play as the anti stapler, and you must to unjoin the paper. Paper is joined together T
Did your team create the vast majority of the art during the 48 hours?
Yes
We created the vast majority of the art during the game jam
Did your team create the vast majority of the music during the 48 hours?
Yes
We created the vast majority of the music during the game jam
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Thank you for rating my game! We took 1290 place! Thank you again!
Those sound effects got me :D Great idea, funny and chill to play. Would have liked some feedback to know when I was "harming" the paper, didn't realize that was happening until I game-overed. Great entry!
Thank you! Yes, you are right, I will add sound when you harming the paper.
Why is this so addicting? :D
The game has a super chill vibe. Loved the soundtrack and the sounds the anti-stapler makes are hilarious.
Also, the red guidelines towards the staples are a great little piece of design. Without them, it would probably be a little frustrating to spot the staples, but with them everything just flows.
Ah, thank you so much for your feedback!
Thanks for the chill therapy session. Its oddly pleasing & make me smile playing this game, maybe its the mundane task combined with chill music & hilarious sfx :D
Great entry, very creative & original, good job!
Thank you for playing:)
I enjoyed my time spent with this game, it is pretty simple, but there is something relaxing about it. I really liked the sound of anti stapler and generally I think it is quite a spin on the idea, most games I saw until now were about joining something together not unjoining it. Good job!
I'm very glad you like it! Thank you for your feedback!
A lovely little game with a humor that's right up my alley.
XD Thank you!
What an original idea. Nice ^^
Thank you:)
What an original idea. Nice ^^
There's something about removing staplers from papers that is just relaxing. really interesting concept. I'd like to see more wacky papers or like a fun, silly story that is shown over multiple papers.
Thank you very much! Also thank you for suggestions
There's something about removing staplers from papers that is just relaxing. really interesting concept. I'd like to see more wacky papers or like a fun, silly story that is shown over multiple papers.
So cool! I watched it on stream and then played it, and it is really fun. Love the paper's texts and the music is so funky! Amazing entry :D
Thank you!
thanks for submitting to the form!
THE GOOD (what i liked, and what stood out for me):
A very unique idea, with a fun setup! It reminded me of papers please, and the musics fits the new yorky, business-y theme of the game! I found the sound effects hilarious, and kept me de-stapling for around 10 minutes, which is something! finished 125 staples and worked overtime XD
THE BAD (what i disliked, the bugs, and other problems):
I think adding a timer for each paper, so that the player is encouraged to work quicker (and therefore make more mistakes) would definitely make the game more challenging and fun! Perhaps adding some better assets for the paper itself, like something that looks like a newspaper may have been nice.
THE HARSH (stuff that would just make the game better, usually just personal opinion, don't take it too heavily :D ):
Having multiple tools and jobs to do for each paper. For example having a paper where not only do you have to remove the staple, but you also have to black out names and add sticky notes with text!
OVERALL: 4,4,3 awesome game!
Thank you again! Also thank you for the suggestions!
This was suprisingly addicting! OMNOMNOMNOM! Good times :D
Thank you:)
Hi Robo and Adam!
Our sound engineer is also named Adam! That's fun.
This game is really entertaining. The music and the anti-stapler sound effects are funny and make for interesting audio. I love how simple the concept is, and I love the idea of turning mundane tasks into games!
It needs a timing mechanic! I love how missing the staples hurts the paper, but there is no incentive (besides my own intrinsic motivation) to move quickly through each new piece. Adding a timer will make it more likely for the player to slip up and create a challenge.
Excellent work, and a very fun game!
Best,
Brandon from TheIndieDream
Hi! Thank you so much for your comment and for your suggestions!
I am definitely going to refer to that tool as an "anti-stapler" in normal life now.
Satisfying and smooth little game. I'd love to see some sort of extra motivator to remove the staples fast / well, e.g. a time limit, or maybe more and more papers keep coming in so they pile up if you don't keep on top of them
(p.s. I literally laughed out loud when the anti-stapler made that om-nom-nom sound when I removed my first staple, loved it)
Thank you so much:). Also thank you for the ideas!
This game is a meme and I love it. 10/10 which is impressive on a 5 star scale.
Thank you so much. I'm glad you like this game.
I like those interesting sound effects and the chill BGM.
Thank you:)
Cheers ;)
:(. So thank you for your comment, maybe you want something to see in game to make it more fun. Thank you!
Sorry, I didn't really look at the papers while I did it. I was just focused on clicking carefully many times. Maybe that's my fault haha.
No problem. Also thank you for your comments again:)
I thought I did a bad job giving feedback, so I was hoping it would be helpful if I gave some more specific advice. I felt like only four mistakes to get fired was quite harsh, maybe it would be nice if there were a way to reset the count sometimes. I also feel like I need something more rewarding to make me want to stay and take out more staples. In real life I might stay in a crappy job so I can have an apartment or feed my family, but maybe some other ideas could be to get silly toys on the desk or better staple removing tools?
Hopefully some of that is interesting, sorry for failing to be more helpful the first time around!
Is that the civilian from TF2?
Yes:). Thank you for your comment! Don't forget to rate the game!