Exceptional job capturing the intended atmosphere and channeling the source inspiration.

A bonus might be a brief overview of the adventure before jumping into the history on page 2. The BREED CYCLE OF THE MIND-KHEG section was great.

I liked the map and layout. I also liked that each of the Mind-Kheg forms in the monsters section had some unique elements for combat.

Agood OSRlien adventure :-)
Great writing, clean layout, cool map and amazing art.

I'd have rated this highly simply for the genius of Jonsey the Badger, but the rest deserves a high rating too! The alien influence is maybe a little on the nose, but at the same time, it's really cool. I can see the dwarven magictech being really fun to play with.

So impressed with this one! Great premise, great map. The information layout is really top notch. I appreciate that you included your design prompt, a simple timeline that gives all the context needed, and delve shifts to use with Knave 2e specifically! I liked the separate section for all the magical items that could be found also. Easy to read room descriptions, just straight up a solid horror crawl!

Dwarves with split skulls skittering around on all fours?? Can't wait to freak players out with that one XD

Love this. The look of it is awesome, and the idea of the Key of the Condemned is so good that I'm going to have to include that as a boss feature at some point. It would be cool if there were more starting hooks, for how this adventure might be entered by a party that's already been hexcrawling for a while. But it'd be easy to throw this up on a missions board or something.
You have a ton of cool ideas with this adventure, and a really nice dungeon. Good job! Excited to toss this into my next campaign :)

Okay, while I was getting into the thick of reading this, a construction vehicle down the street started emitting a strange blip sound that was a spot-on match for the Alien motion sensors. And it genuinely made my heart speed up for a second. Combine that with your generator prompt being such a strong platform for this concept, and I'd say reality is conspiring on Ankheg's behalf.

This is both a fun original adventure and a great adaptation of Alien! It's well thought out within the fantasy world context, with plenty of new ideas to intrigue and shock the players. Plus I like how the Warrior evokes the original singular Alien, while the Nymphs evoke the hoards of aliens from sequels. You had your brain-cake and ate it, too! Nice horror, nice homage, and above all nice original spin!