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Ogre's Becoming's itch.io pageResults
| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Concepts & Originality | #43 | 3.130 | 3.500 |
| Adherence to Theme | #50 | 1.845 | 2.063 |
| Flow & Clarity | #50 | 1.789 | 2.000 |
| Overall | #50 | 2.255 | 2.521 |
Ranked from 16 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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Definitely one of the more uniquely told stories. Thank you for putting the link in the comments! Glad I was able to read and rate it
file:///C:/Users/rafay/OneDrive/Documents/short%20stories%20-%20Copy/short%20sotories/OPR%20Writing%20Jam%2011%20-%20Ogre's%20Becoming.pdf
The writing comes off a little bit hoity but ultimately, I surprised that the pacing worked so well despite that. Still, its always fun to find stereotype breaking tropes in these jams, like this unexpectedly poetic ogre. Sorry you had upload issues.
thank you. yeah i think the upload issue's why's i'm not getting ratings. i'll see if next time i can make it a bit more thoughtful.
Hats off for the ambition of this piece and great concepts. Maybe trying to add a little too much in, but feel of the frantic panic was palpable. Well done.
thank you so much. it was a bit of a challenge to do something like this since i have never done a challenge like this before
PDF Version
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-zGVZZLhZ-umBCNvqc9GFH5zQ6y5ZQAmU17bLmdCgRg/...
maybe this will work
This link works 👍
wait hold up what's happening
See if you can post like a link to a Google doc or something, make sure to convert it to a PDF. I wouldn't be able to view a .docx file even it the website hadn't flagged your file.
I did too, I ended up sending it to my Notes App and it was a Word document. It looks like it maybe a little longer than expected? But I don’t know why the website is flagging it either?
Getting a quarantine warning from the website when trying to open the document? Anyone eles getting that?
I got too. And feel scared to be honest hehehe
Yup me too. Was waiting for someone else to open it first...