Really like the combination of orchestral music with synthesizers, some parts remembered me of C418. One small issue, for me at least, is that sounds that go quickly from left and right can be a bit tiring for the listener.
I like the orchestral approach, you did well, but let me give you my two cents about what you can improve:
In my opinion, the melody played by the plucks in the beginning does not seem to "go" a certain direction, it doesn't feel like it comes to a conclusion, or resolve;
This one is optional, but I see you've used sounds from FLEX. While FLEX is a pretty good plugin, it is still a synthesizer, and because orchestral instruments are real acoustic instruments, they are going to sound better if you use sounds of the real instruments, recorded. Most samplers, especially orchestral, are quite expensive, but there are free options such as BBC SO Discover, which I like, and I use it pretty often.
I really enjoyed your music! Looking forward to seeing you in upcoming competitions!
Your songs would be 10x better if you choose another guitar sound and made it fit in better. Your leads are generally a bit weird. Once you get that sorted out I'm sure you'll see your music become much better.
For a first song, it isn't bad! I recommend you study some music theory and learn about writing concepts such as call and answer and harmonical and rhythmical repetition(very important, as Redline and all big composers would say, repetition is key). Good luck!
