I didn't think they were checkpoints, is there any tutorial inside that are checkpoints? Because at least I didn't see it
PechoEsponja
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visually I loved it, plus this kind of game reminds me of classics like ‘The house of the dead’ that I love, the only negative thing to note is that I shot where the enemy was and I was killed by shooting at a wall (I imagine it has to do with the collisions) and this was repeated several times, I hope it only happened to me
personally, I think it has a good atmosphere, but you have too much jumpscare, I don't mean the fnaf type (which you don't have), you use too many moments that loud sound + image = scare, one like this that was unnecessary is the mannequin that seems to have an epileptic seizure, I also think that the atmosphere is well achieved so it also makes you tense
I can play it at the end, (I extracted the winrar before windows deleted it xd), and the idea of your game is good, although there are some things like that I didn't understand very well where I put the screws (the model of the object), or the sound of the steps that only with pressing the shift key it sounded like you were walking even if you didn't move. Anyway, it's a short game that's nice, good job.
Good game, I thought it would be a platform game, but it was a kind of game I didn't expect. I saw that this is your first game and I wanted to give you some recommendations for the next one.
-Add background music, believe me it will improve a lot the feeling you want to give to the player.
-Check out a page called ‘Lospec’, it has several pixelart tutorials, plus you have a section to draw a colour palette, it will help you a lot to make it feel better.
-Don't make the sprites too big, it's better to have 32x32 or 16x16 sprites with less detail, otherwise it can happen like with some things in the game that feel too flat.
- Make dialogue on the fly or faster, because for people who read fast it's hell.
I hope it will help you to improve in the future, good job, and I hope to see some more of your games in the future.
you are my candidate for winner, what a video game. The beginning, just with the text game and discovering that I could move, made me feel that this could be very unique. I love the visuals, and above all, the feeling that something is not right from the beginning and the feeling of insecurity that this game generates is TRUE HORROR, you have my 5 stars.