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A jam submission

ValorieView game page

A short adventure of a bird who hates light
Submitted by Finn Truong — 2 hours, 6 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
VISUALS#114.5804.580
MUSIC#174.1184.118
SOUNDS#273.9083.908
OVERALL#1073.8243.824
DESIGN#1623.5383.538
THEME#2303.4453.445
INNOVATION#3603.0083.008

Ranked from 119 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

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Submitted(+1)

This game looks and feels very good. I love Valorie because she reminds me of me when I was a teenager. I absolutely didn't like the light. I just wish it was a tad bit longer. I give it a solid 5 star

Submitted(+1)

This game is absolutely beautiful in it's visuals, probably one of the prettiest I've seen in the jam. The music fits perfectly and all of the little sound effects, like jumping on platforms is perfect as well. I wish it was longer and had a better conclusion to the story, but for 1 week, that's entirely understandable! I hope you keep working on this and turn it into a full game, I'd happily play it again!

The only improvement I could suggest would be to make the platforming a little more fluid through something like coyote time.

Great game overall! Check out my game if you get a chance!

Submitted(+1)

Very relaxing game! I enjoyed the whole experience. Great work on the dialogue and character development, I was actually kind of sad when the game ended. I wasn't completely sure what the white glowing bird did. Did I miss something? I tried to interact with it. Either way, great game overall!

Developer

Thank you so much for playing!! 

You can press E when the prompt pop up near the white bird to trigger some dialogues :D

Submitted(+1)

Beautiful atmosphere. Very funny and well written dialogue, really gave strong characters in a very short time. Well Done!

Submitted(+1)

I love this game. It has really relaxing atmosphere and the most beautiful graphics of all games in this jam.

Submitted(+1)

loved it so much the art is breathtaking it reminded me of the Ori games, the characters are great and charming but why is this so short i really wanted more.

you have to continue this project man, the best looking game in this game jam by far in my opinion.

Submitted(+1)

I love the atmosphere, the visuals, good music selection, great work!

Submitted(+1)

As people below have stated, this is a beautiful game. From the sound design to the visuals. Even the movement is on point. 

In some places the dialog may have went on too long, but that is just my personal preference and I don't think its fair to judge the game poorly on that.

Overall a great submission, and I think I'll take some tips from this game in terms of atmospheric lighting, opposed to the lights I used in my submission.

Kudos!

Submitted(+1)

the visuals are stuning, the personalities are great, i just love the music and sounds, one of the best entried ive seen so far! only if it was longer, awesome job!

Submitted(+1)

Amazing game! i love everything about it, the dialogue, music, visuals! i was kind of sad when it ended since i was really into it that i even lost track of time and it went by so quick... Good Job!

Developer

Thank you so much for playing!! I'm really happy you liked it :D

Submitted(+1)

I love games with that vibe, beautiful visuals and music! Very relaxing game.

Developer(+1)

Thank you :D

I'm really glad you liked it!

Submitted(+1)

I Liked The Ambience ALOT! it is very polished and well made. The Graphics is so good that it actually lags my computer a bit. The music fits very well for the game. My only concern is the dialogs is too nonformal for a beautiful game like this. I suggest you to improve the writing a bit, because it just doesn't blend very well...

Developer

Thank you for playing and the feedback! I really appreciate it!

Submitted(+1)

Love this game! I love the little story and the way everyone talks, amazing game!

Developer(+1)

Super happy you liked it :D

Submitted(+1)

Gorgeous graphics. Your interpretation of the theme is similar to mine :) Good job!

Developer

Thank you for playing! Can't wait to check your game out :D

Submitted(+2)

Artstyle and personality was perfect! And the music worked well with it. I kinda wish you could click E to auto-complete the sentences during the conversations, thats my advice, cus it wrote them quite slowly. Its not a hard or fleshed out game but I know thats not what you were going for. It was still memorable for sure :)

Developer

Thank you so much for playing!

You're right, I'd love to add a skip button, after the jam maybe :D

Submitted(+1)

Very strong Night in the Woods vibes here, love it! I did feel at times the dialogue didn't match the " calm tone" of the game. 

Developer

I love NITW too!!

Thank you so much for playing and the feedback, super appreciate it!

Submitted(+1)

Very nice visuals :) also the music sets an emotional tone, while the dialog is well done and funny. I dont really have any feedback. If i have to think of something its that its quite short and not so challenging but still a very good job :)

Developer

Thank you so much for playing :D

Submitted (1 edit)

very nice graphics and music, but i would have liked better dialogues and a better development of characters (: neat nonetheless, Check out my game as well!

Developer

Thank so much for playing!! I'd love to expand on it after the jam.

I'll make sure to check your game out!

Submitted (2 edits) (+1)

The visuals in this are incredible, great work! Also love the relaxing music. It's amazing that the main character can be so angry in such a chill game! :D

Thanks for your feedback on my game as well!

Developer

Thanks so much for playing!! Your game is super cool so I'm really glad you liked mine =))

Submitted(+1)

First off, the visuals are amazing! Its good to see a more story based game in a Game Jam, but I feel like the game-play it had could have been a bit more fleshed out. Overall a very beautiful game!

Developer

Thank you so much playing!

 I'd love to expand on it after the jam!

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