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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Graphics | #423 | 3.412 | 3.412 |
| Fun | #843 | 2.471 | 2.471 |
| Overall | #847 | 2.544 | 2.544 |
| Game Design | #876 | 2.471 | 2.471 |
| Audio | #907 | 2.265 | 2.265 |
| Innovation | #908 | 2.294 | 2.294 |
| Theme | #939 | 2.353 | 2.353 |
Ranked from 34 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
How does your game fit the theme?
Its an Adventure Game on a island. Youre required to Collect a specific amount of coins to Make an Secret Door/Portal Appear. All while an Timer Runs down and once its finished well you die.
Did you write all the code and made all the assets from scratch?
Kinda well no. Assets where mostly from the Asset store some small items where done ourselfs (S4murix and me). Code was 95% Copied from Videos or Forums. But we Learned A lot.
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Congratulations on you first completed project! It could do better with some sfx and music, I think it would make the world feel less empty while you collect the coins
Thank you! We are working on it!
Pretty chill game, even though I couldn't understand the "calm" and "storm" from this game :/
Hope that you'll also play mine :) https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-12/rate/2973690
Thank you! We had the plan that after the Timer ends The world would slowly fall apart but didnt had enough time.
Good. It's fun
Thank you very much!
Fun little island. Interesting idea, could use some polish, but overall good effort. Couldn't find the exit portal though
Hey!
Could you tell us what you would polish?
The exit was at the camp fire :D
Much love <3
Hello! I really liked the visuals and discovering around the island there is only few things i can say to improve your game, one of them i find controls a bit difficult and there is little few bugs while i play. But its a game jam project so i am sure its gonna be awesome after feedback updates! Well done!♥
If you have time please take a look at our game too some feedbacks would be really helpful for us ☺https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-12/rate/2973922
Hey!
How would you change the Movement? We've redone the movement, maybe we can tweak it here and there.
Could you explain us what bugs you came across and how u managed to pull them up?
Thank you very much for your kind words!
much love <3
I do agree with most commentors as everything that I wanted to say has been said but still this was a good effort man and with a bit of polish and tweaks here and there, this game could be even more fun and wonderful to play. I know how you feel because I was ambitious and I made a lot of mistakes and errors as well on my own game submission but that's life, you and you learn. Anyways I'm done yapping, Good effort man :D
Thank you very much for the advice and sorry for the late reply!
much love <3
Don't know where to start as most of what I want to say has already been said before... It feels more like a prototype, I like the level design and animations though.
My suggestions -
1) Add a looping BGM, the game is too bland without it.
2) Add a rules panel/ in game controls list. A new player doesn't know what to do.
3) The 'Collect coins to unlock a secret door' should be visible as the game starts as someone might just miss it (like I did at first)
4) The movement need some work, as other people already mentioned
5) I noticed a bug where if you keep dying and keep collecting 1 coin each time, the coins keep spawning but the coin counter disappears.
I read you had less time to work on the project, I have been in such situations in the past :D. It's okay if this project wasn't grand or how you envisioned, keep learning and improving that's all!
Hey thank you!
1: Will be added!
2: Will also be added
3: Yeah i kinda fricked it up by not changing the Player Spawnpoint before submitting and noticed it the next Day. it was planned to spawn in the Small Village right in front of the Text that says a door appears.
4: yeah we already worked on it today, as we plan to continue this game.
5 Was also fixed today.
we are happy to hear that you liked the Level design!
It was our first game we worked on with real Motivation!
Nice demo. I liked the sound effects and animations. The scenery looked good.
Recommendations:
- Fix the camera, as it goes behind walls.
- It's best not to make 3D platformer controls so slippery, as it increases the difficulty and some of your platforms are tiny.
- Wasn't sure how I died. This should be more obvious.
- Coins reset, but the tally doesn't.
- Timer is a bit harsh.
- Music.
- Moving clouds were distracting, I'd remove them.
It's a great start, but needs some work. Good luck!
Hey thank you very much for your advice! We noted it and will fix everything!
much love <3
I really like level layout and it was interesting to discover some interesting places in there.
Art is nice but maybe clouds move too fast :)
There were mentions about reload bug, camera controls, coyote timeand bunnyhop so I've nothing new to add!
Except to say, what you can check Stormflow as well :)
For the first ever Map, we are proud aswell!
Camera, reload and time getting already fixed!
much love
Visuals are great! Most of the problems I had are mentioned in the comments. Something to keep in mind is that the coin counter does not reset when you die, but coins do!
Edit: I will shamelessly ask if you can check out our game at some point, would muck appreciate!
Thank you very much for telling us, we are already on fixing it!
Ofc, i'll give it a try ^^
by holding diagonals and turn the the camera in to the opposite direction u get this speedbug. i used it to bunnyhop all of over the map and had so much fun :)
On the first day when we started, we noticed it aswell. We kept it in because we think its a funny feature :D
much love <3
Minecraft parkour vibes. Nice graphics, but very difficult controls! Also, I would like to be able to move my camera around like in Minecraft or any other 3D view games. It also looks like you could add more content, such as difficult obstacles and different types of terrain. Also, the double jump would be nice!
Your Ideas are insane. We noted them and see what we can do with the following update
A bit weird that you reload multiple times after falling, also recommend implementing stuff like Cyote time and all just to make parkour easier but its really nice you were able to whip this up together so quick, great job!
Thank you! We plan to continue the game so we will def. take a look at Cyote time and Try it out!
As for the Reload Bug, we didnt had much time left so we had to quickly do something to make it appear as lost. So its currently just Reload scene once you Down on Time or fall down but we will change that.
Good game! Its a bit bugy and the animations are snapy, but overall i think its a Great Game. :)
We are currently on fixing the bugs and animations ^^
Much love <3
The visuals are great, they remind me of Minecraft. I like that part of the game that is underground. Thumbs up
We will work more with Caves. Maybe there will be a Part in the sky aswell ^^
Nice looking game! it need a bit of polishing :)
We are on it! Thank you
The isometric view and the visuals of the game that you used are a masterpiece. Keep it up:)
Every visuals we used are Credited and they are Free in unity asset store!
Feel free to check them out.
Your nice words meant a lot to us!
Be sure to check mine as well.
I loved all overall look. And how it was fun to explore the island. I think this was a very good first, so keep it up. A little suggestion for next time is to try and find the focus. This game would have worked just as well if there wasn't any parkour from the starter island to the main.
We miss placed the Spawn point, because we were testing the bridge..
Thank you for your Review!
Little Buggy , but nice game 🫶🏻
<3
Pretty ok game, with good graphics, a bit creepy just what I like. It was clunky and buggy from time to time but nothing major. Unfortunately no audio :(
overall 6.5/10
Thank you very much for your Review, we are looking forward to fix the bugs!
Much love!