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A jam submission

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Toon Adventure
Submitted by Raishji, S4murix — 41 minutes, 8 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Graphics#4233.4123.412
Fun#8432.4712.471
Overall#8472.5442.544
Game Design#8762.4712.471
Audio#9072.2652.265
Innovation#9082.2942.294
Theme#9392.3532.353

Ranked from 34 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How does your game fit the theme?
Its an Adventure Game on a island. Youre required to Collect a specific amount of coins to Make an Secret Door/Portal Appear. All while an Timer Runs down and once its finished well you die.

Did you write all the code and made all the assets from scratch?
Kinda well no. Assets where mostly from the Asset store some small items where done ourselfs (S4murix and me). Code was 95% Copied from Videos or Forums. But we Learned A lot.

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Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

I really like level layout and it was interesting to discover some interesting places in there.
Art is nice but maybe clouds move too fast :)

There were mentions about reload bug, camera controls, coyote timeand bunnyhop so I've nothing new to add!
Except to say, what you can check Stormflow as well :)

Developer

For the first ever Map, we are proud aswell! 

Camera, reload and time getting already fixed!

much love

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

Visuals are great! Most of the problems I had are mentioned in the comments. Something to keep in mind is that the coin counter does not reset when you die, but coins do!

Edit: I will shamelessly ask if you can check out our game at some point, would muck appreciate!

Developer

Thank you very much for telling us, we are already on fixing it!

Ofc, i'll give it a try ^^

Submitted(+1)

by holding diagonals and turn the the camera in to the opposite direction u get this speedbug. i used it to bunnyhop all of over the map and had so much fun :)

Developer

On the first day when we started, we noticed it aswell. We kept it in because we think its a funny feature :D

much love <3

Submitted(+1)

Minecraft parkour vibes. Nice graphics, but very difficult controls! Also, I would like to be able to move my camera around like in Minecraft or any other 3D view games. It also looks like you could add more content, such as difficult obstacles and different types of terrain. Also, the double jump would be nice!

Developer

Your Ideas are insane. We noted them and see what we can do with the following update

Submitted(+1)

A bit weird that you reload multiple times after falling, also recommend implementing stuff like Cyote time and all just to make parkour easier but its really nice you were able to whip this up together so quick, great job!

Developer

Thank you! We plan to continue the game so we will def. take a look at Cyote time and Try it out! 
As for the Reload Bug, we didnt had much time left so we had to quickly do something to make it appear as lost. So its currently just Reload scene once you Down on Time or fall down but we will change that.

Submitted(+1)

Good game!  Its a bit bugy and the animations are snapy, but overall i think its a Great Game. :)

Developer

We are currently on fixing the bugs and animations ^^

Much love <3

Submitted(+1)

The visuals are great, they remind me of Minecraft. I like that part of the game that is underground. Thumbs up

Developer

We will work more with Caves. Maybe there will be a Part in the sky aswell ^^

Submitted(+1)

Nice looking game! it need a bit of polishing :)

Developer

We are on it! Thank you

Submitted(+1)

The isometric view and the visuals of the game that you used are a masterpiece. Keep it up:)

Developer (1 edit) (+1)

Every visuals we used are Credited and they are Free in unity asset store!

Feel free to check them out.

Your nice words meant a lot to us!

Submitted

Be sure to check mine as well.

Submitted(+1)

I loved all overall look. And how it was fun to explore the island. I think this was a very good first, so keep it up. A little suggestion for next time is to try and find the focus. This game would have worked just as well if there wasn't any parkour from the starter island to the main.

Developer

We miss placed the Spawn point, because we were testing the bridge.. 

Thank you for your Review!

Submitted(+1)

Little Buggy , but nice game 🫶🏻

Developer

<3

Submitted(+1)

Pretty ok game, with good graphics, a bit creepy just what I like. It was clunky and buggy from time to time but nothing major.  Unfortunately no audio :(

overall 6.5/10

Developer

Thank you very much for your Review, we are looking forward to fix the bugs!

Much love!

Submitted(+2)

The game looks pretty good, I particularly liked the lonely atmosphere, it reminded me of that old "Slenderman" game, where you needed to retrieve some pages, hahahaha Anyways, as others have mentioned, it lacks audio and it is a little bit buggy on respawn, but of course those are not the end of the world. You mentioned that you learned a lot, and I hope you had fun with the development of it! I am sure you guys will keep making great stuff in the future.

Developer(+1)

Thank you very much! Yes We learned Alot and want to continue this Game! The GameJam gave us a reason and Motivation to work on this game everyday  as much as we could!

Submitted(+2)

The game seems to be buggy, causing me to have a hard time navigating. Specifically, when I spawn in the game the player character starts bouncing and glitching around. I also had a hard time jumping on the platforms, some of them are too far to land on. The art of the game is good, and the style is lighthearted which I like. The sound FX are cool too.

Developer(+2)

Hey sorry to Hear this. Yes i Made a small little mistake before submitting. I placed the Start Point of the Player on the wrong spot. 

we did not encounter any bouncing and Glitching but i do have to say that this is our first game so the Code is not Optimized or well made.

Small Tip once you collect the Coin on the starting Island after about ~2 Seconds A Bridge will Come up making a way to the Big Island without the Jump and Run. As it was intented to do the Jump and Run from the Other side. Im sorry about that. Thank you for your comment!

Submitted(+2)

Oh okay! I found the bridge, the game looks great! I love how the Environment changes, very creative design. The underground area was a highlight for me :) good job!!!

Developer(+1)

Realy means a lot to us, thank you very much <3

Developer(+2)

Thank you Very Much!

Submitted(+2)

The game looks great, but the lack of sounds or music can make it more empty, and sometimes when falling it restarts in loop until I move, but no worries, you will make it more bigger, and more fun.

Developer (1 edit) (+2)

Thank you! Yeah Sounds where one of the last thing we did.  Sadly my Friend S4mirx who worked with me got ill in the past 2 Days so it got harder to Finish on Time. Thanks for you Kind words. We Plan to continue it!

Submitted(+2)

Hey guys, sadly i can not play your game on my Mac, still i gave your game a rating based on info and screenshots and cudos for creating your first ever playable game! I too got sick at the start of the jam (covid) but also managed to finish my game :)

Developer(+1)

Sorry we were so Focused on Finishing it that we didnt think About Mac users. We will add it in a Later Update as we Plan to Continue it!
Still Thank you for the Rating. I hope you are felling better now! We will test your Game too and Rate it Later!

Submitted(+2)

I liked the graphics, but i wish there were more things to do in game in addition to finding coins. Anyways, good job there :D

Developer(+1)

Thank you very much for the advice, it was our first ever playable game and we started late + i got sick, so past 2 days Raishi had to carry. The following Updates will add another level and we rebuild the Collectible system (more stuff to pick up, maybe puzzles, etc.)

Developer (1 edit) (+1)

Thank you! Samurix answered most of it. We plan to continue the Game and Add more stuff as the Levels go on. So more Coins/Collectibles and Puzzles As well!

Submitted(+2)

The vertical camera movement (or the lack off) makes it a bit difficult sometimes. But I like the idea and generic feel of the game!

Developer(+1)

We will work on it and add it with the next update! Thank you very much!

Developer(+1)

Yes we noticed that too. But as Time ran Short we had to shift our Focus on more Important Things. We will Fix that in the next Update.
Thank you!

Developer(+1)

We started late, so we had 4 Days left, we learned alot and looking forward to update the game and finialize it! If you dont want to miss any Updates, Follow Raishi and me!

Developer(+1)

(He is the Second Game Dev)

Submitted(+2)

Nice game

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