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A jam submission

Last ticket for EternityView game page

Dark murder mystery game where you time travel in order to prevent your own death from happening.
Submitted by Dark Peace, GRAMSINATOR — 11 minutes, 54 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Immersion (Gameplay & Storytelling Engagement)#243.8573.857
Relevance (Creative Expression of Theme)#283.9713.971
Overall#383.7003.700
Aesthetic Flair (Graphics & Sound Presentation)#493.9433.943
Technical Excellence (Design & Engineering)#953.0293.029

Ranked from 35 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Made by One or Two People

yes this was made by just me / us

All Original Content

yes everything was made during the jam

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Submitted(+1)

I absolutely loved this idea! The graphics were charming, the music was perfect, and it was a fun little murder mystery. Granted I could not solve it even after finding the letter for the wife, but I still enjoyed it. I know the controls have been mentioned before, so I won't bring it up again, but there was quite a few crashes for me even outside of the known bug. Overall though, great game! I love the take on the theme super creative!

Developer

Thank you for the feedback !

Submitted(+1)

I enjoyed the atmosphere, and the music! I could not solve the mystery, but the setting looks really unique and creative!

Developer

Thx !

There's some clues on the game's page on how to get the true ending, if you want.

Submitted(+2)

This feels like a real game! The art style is great and the music wonderful. Love the concept too, fits the theme perfectly and creatively! My only complaint is that the control scheme of arrows, click and spacebar is a little awkward. I would have used WASD for movement and probably ditch the spacebar entirely, overloading the mouse click with both interaction and dialogue advancement. This game really stands out in the jam, congratulations for the great job!

Developer

Thanks !

Yes you're not the first to tell me about the contrôls. I'll change it for the post-jam version.

Submitted(+1)

Really interesting. I guess I’ll replay it several times to see different endings

Submitted(+1)

I really enjoyed the pixel art and the murder in the train theme! It crashed after returning back to check doctors bag so I did not manage to finish it. I recommend for game jam to make it a bit shorter but I understand that you wanted to tell a story. Great job :)

Developer

Ok thx I was not aware of that bug, you're the first one to find it.

Submitted(+2)

I had so much fun I loved every second of this game. The art is perfect the sound is perfect the story is perfect. The theme is used in such a creative way. I dont care about the bug i ran into where the game crashes because i can see why there was no more time left to fix it. In my opinion this is one of the games that would deserve winning this contest.

Developer

Thank you so much !

Submitted(+1)

This is a great story, got me hooked, the art, animation looks awesome and everything else is very well done. One note tho, you should use AD to move instead of the arrow keys cuz i have to awkwardly place my fingers onto the arrow and the space key cuz my right hand was on the mouse, so if you use the AD keys that should be fixed. Overall awesome submission!

Submitted(+1)

An excellent take for a narrative murder mystery. The music and art aesthetic topped it off for a great murder mystery story experience!

Submitted(+1)

Game crashed first time I played by walking to the right cabin, then immediately left, then right again and talking to the people from left to right. It crashed on the lady. ><

Game crashed a second time when I reached the 2nd cabin with the man holding a gun on the right. :(

Looks like it's an interesting game but I'm sad it keeps crashing.

Developer

Yeah I'm aware of the first one (which is why there's written "read game's page", you can see how to avoid it). The second seem strange, I don't see where it is and nobody reported anything like that 🤔

(+1)

Okay that was cool, but unless someone else was meant to die then I think I didn't get the final ending and that frustrated me :P

Developer

There is no way to avoid a death, someone will die. I think you got the true ending

Jam Host(+1)

I really enjoyed this! I don't think I managed to find the correct ending though, I ran through about 4 times and couldn't figure out how to get the bodyguards gun as Marie gave it to Dr Caffein each time. Really enjoyed it regardless, as the graphics were great, the sound effects and music were immersive and the storytelling was wonderful, each character was well fleshed out for a gamejam game! Really great job.

Also, I didn't have a clock which was weird!

Developer

I think I should have added something like ending 1 out of 3 or something like that. If you got the end with the choice, you got the true ending.

Thank you for playing !

Submitted(+1)

Oh, what an interesting game! The first time I got shot, the game just closed by itself though. I thought that was part of the story lol. When I played the second time, it just went back to the beginning. So I think the closing was a bug? Also, probably better to use WASD instead of the arrow if we are meant to use the space button as well. Kinda awkward to spread my finger across.

Anyway, I really enjoyed the story, gameplay, art and sound. Great job!

Developer

Yeah it was a bug XD Thank you for playing !

Developer

Thank you.

Indeed making the game crash when you die could be a nice mechanic ^^ Probably for some other game theme but it could really work (especially if you could design an interesting error message) You got lucky to crash on your own death aha

Submitted(+1)

Cool game! Actually, it takes me back to when I used to binge play point and click adventure games, well done.

Developer(+1)

Thank you !

Submitted(+1)

rare to see a story game in a jam but i liked it! the story is definitely the focus, and the game is designed well around it. clues are revealed logically as the game progresses. the sound design and music are really quite good, and the art fit the mood well. however, the gameplay is a little monotonous. the player is able to go back in time, but that feature is rarely used, which i felt was a missed opportunity. the controls were also janky, not being able to use wasd is usually not a problem, but when i have to use the space key, it felt very unnatural to control the game.

Developer

Thx for feedback !

I didn't know the contrôls we're weird because that's the way I play must of games XD

Submitted(+1)

Great story, but without spoiler i couldn't find the solution i'm too bad :c Good job ! 

Developer

Thx !

Submitted(+1)

Great game loved the story

Submitted(+2)

Very cool! Love the way the story is told in little increments, and the moving back and forth through time. Game crashed when I got the bad ending, and I agree with everyone who says that arrows+space+mouse is an awkward control scheme. But I found it compelling enough to replay for the true ending, and that's the real test of a game like this. Good job.

Developer(+1)

Thank you for playing !

I'm not aware of this crash, it's strange. I'll look into it.

Submitted(+1)

Very well polished and stylish murder mystery! The hook of reliving moments of time through traversing between the cars leads to an engaging core loop and the unfolding narrative was gripping, especially when framed against the time constraints!

One complaint is that separating the arrow keys, mouse, and spacebar for the main interactions, it's quite uncomfortable to play. Having left-click as both the inspect and text crawl would be a good option for inputs.

The music was really well composed, too! Well done all around.

Developer(+1)

Thank you for the feedback !

Submitted(+1)

This was super nice! The storytelling is incredible, and the pixel art is on spot too! I have faced a couple of bugs, but you know, that´s how game jams work. Anyways, really impressed with the size of the game, knowing the short time to make it, great job this was a neat experience :)

Developer

Thank you so much !

 I'll play yours tomorrow !

Submitted(+1)

Great game! It was very interesting! I would have prefered it if you had chosen different key, because it was harder to navigate this way. But the game was very engaging! I loved your art and the animations! Really awesome! I just couldn't see the ending yet, because my game crashed right before the end. not sure why

Developer

Right before the end ??

I know about a crash near the beginning but not that.

Thx for feedback !

Submitted

yeah, at least i guess it was right before the end, because it seemed like a last conversation with the wife

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