Great twist ending!
Play book
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| Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
| Adherence to the Theme | #2 | 4.474 | 4.474 |
| Overall | #3 | 4.105 | 4.105 |
| Originality | #3 | 4.105 | 4.105 |
| Enjoyment | #8 | 3.737 | 3.737 |
Ranked from 19 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
The twist is good, I love a good mistery, but I want to know more
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The Jester CircusKind of weird when I see a leader type withold info from their minions like this for the sake of plot. It works in its context though. Really liked this story's twist. Still, feels like the Sisters could have been almost any faction with some form of empathy towards what was going on. Sort of wish there was a but more to them development wise, but good yarn.
Interesting execution of the theme, I wonder what another half page would have truly revealed?
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OPR Writing Jam#3-Threshold of Doomstory that ended right where it needed
such precise and calculated blow, i love it
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A Bound of HonorMan that twist! Makes you wonder what happened to all those refugees... of course the true horror could be not knowing.
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Protect the Child at all Costs.So, you tried something ambitious here, and I like what you were going for. At the same time, while I get this is supposed to be a mystery with a twist ending, I felt a little too in the dark - I'm not saying I needed to know everything, but as the story is right now there's so much going on that I felt a little lost trying to follow along.
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The Book of NepentheMost enjoyable, really dug the relationship between the two main characters and I'd love to see more of them.
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Amongst the living and undead
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