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Genesis of Choice's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Flow & Clarity | #9 | 4.006 | 4.222 |
Concept & Originality | #15 | 4.006 | 4.222 |
Overall | #20 | 3.549 | 3.741 |
Adherence to the Theme | #32 | 2.635 | 2.778 |
Ranked from 18 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
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I'm loving this story that takes the backstory of the Robot Legions and uses it in a great way. The exploration between 2 different races in the past shows a different, more individual conflict that larger battle.
I did feel that perhaps the theming could have been made a little clearer.
A lot of Robot representation this jam following the revised Lore dump recently. Good to see it inspire so many writers like this.
This was great! Nice work describing how the robot interfaced with their surroundings.
Very creative with the three acts, though it didn't really have too much to do with the theme at hand. I like the story none the less, and hope you keep at it. It's good.
+1 on the split, nice structure, and a very cool moment to set the short story in. Got a hard "Does this unit have a soul" vibe from it (due to obvious similarities I guess). Great read.
Agree with the others that the split was very original and flavored, very nice.
Splitting the story into three titled parts was a great choice! The story flowed really well and there was a lot of flavor in how you described the environment and events.
I really like how you divided up the story in to 3 "acts", in a way, and thought the process of the robot becoming more sentient was really well done.