I liked the setting. Good story telling.
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Changing Winds: A Jackals Story's itch.io pageResults
Criteria | Rank | Score* | Raw Score |
Flow & Clarity | #5 | 3.909 | 3.909 |
Overall | #13 | 3.833 | 3.833 |
Concepts & Originality | #14 | 4.000 | 4.000 |
Adherence to Theme | #29 | 3.591 | 3.591 |
Ranked from 22 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.
Comments
Great pacing, great characters, great prose. The demon's appearance at the end would've felt a little deus ex machina like, but you foreshadowed it well by having the shaman be uneasy about the temple in general. All in all great story.
Wow. Havoc Sibling Rivalry... Another great cinematic tale.
always love reading about the jackals, and it was nice to see a take on there culture
I enjoyed your description of the jackals and their shamanhood training. I love how Grisha seems like a flat character but her feeling power and the god telling her that it was her fault hinted at her true nature.
I really liked this, even as a familiar tale you put fresh life into it and the imagery of something snail-like tackling another is an unexpected juxtaposition of expectations.
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