Very nice game. I wonder why cashier girl calls player a monster, is it a reference to A Clockwork Orange?  After beating the second stage I can see why,  only monster can beat the game;) Felt so hungry after play, need to buy some milk now.

The moral of the story is: "Always keep the track of food in the fridge, while working from home" :D

Cool game. SFX and animations is on level, but I personally missed some sound feedback from text. But I guess, I'm also got that part wrong in my game :\

This game is really interesting! The story was quite intriguing, and the atmosphere was cool! When I got to the velocity ball section, I had an issue: It was too easy to kill all of my velocity from slightly mistiming it. I think it would be nice if there was a bit more leeway to it :) The graphics are well done, especially with how everything looks like it's in a spotlight. Overall, this game, being a short experience, has well-done graphics and atmosphere, with a story properly tying it together, although it can be a bit punishing in one section. Nice Work!

I like how I can admire fridge from afar!

Amazing work on this! Really liked how you used the effects at your disposal to make it all feel progressively weird! I also failed victim to the mini game... I guess you click or press space to change direction of the ball? Managed a few nice jumps but then got in the valleys that took 30-40 seconds to build momentum.

an amazing game. Intuitive in use and that maintains the player's interest until the end.

An easy and enjoyable piece of game you have here. it's complacent because it doesn't expect much of the player else than following the hints.  But the turnaround that happens at the end, is a great twist,  a nice aberrative ending to an aberrant game! i loved the minigame for following the flow. it's well made. and it perfectly conveys I think your idea. I enjoyed it!

Made me want to play Minecraft again haha, It has a lot of charm, i enjoyed the animations, sounds, and story telling a great game.

The only issue I had was the minigame that you need to do to breath in and out it ended up making me get annoyed, cause I couldn't finish it. but after I finished the minigame it a was fun game, maybe work on the minigame to make abut more fun or even not as long. but overall a great fun little cube-style game. I enjoyed everything in it, story dialog, animations the walking animations and sound we NOICE :D

great job :D

First of all I want to congratulate you, it is absolutely a good product that is quick to enjoy, which perfectly succeeds in the intention of creating discomfort but at the same time wanting to understand the story and where it wants to go. The game works very well from a narrative point of view and I think that by expanding it a little and better exploring some of its features, a good project could emerge.

The only negative note is the actual "gameplay" part, this gameplay which is reminiscent of Tiny Wings needs to be revised a bit, in itself it works, but the absence of feedback makes it all a bit frustrating in the long run, especially given that It's a part you have to get through, and it might take a little too long.

For the rest, I highly recommend the product, it is very beautiful, looks good and has excellent potential.

I like the animations and art you made in the earlier half. Not sure if it was just me, but I had no sound, and I feel sound would've done wonders here. As others have mentioned, the ball game wasn't as intuitive as it should've been, but very nice job overall.

I feel like the art style is not fit for this game but it is very original!

I really like the analogy to schizophrenia/depression/low self-esteem that you gave to the game, and the truth is that the ball minigame is very satisfying once you master it.

How i play the ball game ?

This game is awesome!

I liked the "going with the flow" wave ball thing, felt satisfying to hit those waves at the right angles. At the same time, it kinda lulled me into a sense of security so when that reveal hit I was like "omg nooo", very cleverly executed. The atmosphere was well done as well, I liked the spotlights in particular. Good job!

Very clever way of presenting things -- I really liked the use of the spotlight effect to convey scene changes. This felt super polished. The audio was a bit sparse (and I the volume was really low -- I think it might be worth sending the sound effects through a limiter so you can make sure the volume is evened out for everything), but other than that it was great. Nice work! :)

A creative and quick experience that puts its few assets to good, efficient use. I find it really smart to put the gameplay in these lit little areas surrounded by darkness. Without detracting anything from the experience, it saves you the need to make a surrounding environment that would risk feeling empty if you didn't spend a lot of time populating it. The ball minigame and its physics were fun, though as some others pointed out, it was hard to know what to do until coincidentally hitting the blue line, and the long pause from the story (since the minigame is actually fairly difficult) harms the pacing of the game. The heartbeat in the background does a good job in actually making you feel tense, which was great. Overall, with the interesting story and tension, it gets a solid 8/10 in my book.

Very very good! I really like how minimalist the game is when it comes to assets in general. You have just a couple of models, very few SFX and no music and I'm pretty sure the game doesn't need more, in fact, it might have been worse! The darkness and silence really added to the experience, I can tell you polished to a high degree those little things, which is probably the right thing to go for in a game jam of this length. The only critique I would have is the lack of interactivity. There is very little gameplay, although I can tell this is by design I still think having some gameplay, maybe some exploration or choices usually makes these experiences stick more with the player. But hey, this is game jam and I can't  expect a high level of polish and also having more content. Great job overall!!

Really liked the look and atmosphere of the game - I enjoyed the story parts too (although, they could do with being a bit snappier). 

The ball game did take a while to get used to, wasn't sure what the input was for it at that point, but worked out space bar did push the ball, so eventually got it - would've helped to have some instruction at that point...

All in all, great job - really enjoyed it :)

Bro That Game Soo cool 

Wow! I liked how you transition from one scene to another, seamless. This helps immersion as loading screens are also moments in which we invite the mind to disconnect for a while.

The art is great, you conveyed a lot of meaning with just a few polygons, and they are aesthetically pleasing. Did you use a color palette? Your minimalistic stage play looks very well balanced in terms of color, composition and proportions.

One thing that made me a bit mad was the sinusoid wave/ball phase. It works smoothly once you get the ball to get forwards, but I feel that it is too long, too much time without rewarding the player, so in spite is very good looking, it gets frustrating.

About the text, the cashier telling me to GTFO was a great surprise to stablish the theme. Although I would take care of hoy many dots (.) I used. More than three provoke too much noise. As Bukowski said, when you write is has to read "bang, bang, bang"; do not be afraid of using short, strong sentences that start with no dots and end with a single one ;)

Overall, quite a beautiful piece of art! You should develop it further. As I said, transitions made it really cool!