Skip to main content

Indie game storeFree gamesFun gamesHorror games
Game developmentAssetsComics
SalesBundles
Jobs
Tags
A jam submission

The story no one heard aboutView project page

Submitted by Mhalia — 1 day, 8 hours before the deadline
Add to collection

Play soundtrack

The story no one heard about's itch.io page

Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Correlation to theme#1743.7623.762
Overall#3683.3143.314
Impression#3883.1903.190
Creativity#3903.3333.333
Composition#4093.1903.190
Quality#4603.0953.095

Ranked from 21 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Theme

Inside my world
Picture theme

Link(s) of the submission on streaming services
https://on.soundcloud.com/K71ZiLmtX8eFiPTH8

Number of tracks
1

Genre

Classical
Pop

Soundtrack use permission

Yes (CC BY)

Any project

Leave a comment

Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.

Comments

Submitted(+1)

A very sad story. I liked the decisions you made with the music.

I think the sound design helped a lot and with the new age sound you achieved something very original. 

I really like it!

Very well done!!!

Developer(+1)

Thank yoou... I'm glad  you're enjoying it <3 

I thought of a sad but happy story... 

I think you know what I mean... lol 

Submitted(+1)

Good... it was a cool composition with a GORGEOUS RHYTHM (why do these screams remind me of an amplified but slow heartbeat?) Very good work with effects that set the overall atmosphere

I liked it! Thanks)

Developer

Thank you <3

Submitted(+1)

I think this is really sweet! You have a very nice little melodic idea and you use it really effectively to tell the story. Im going to disagree with a past comment and say i think the drums to stand out a little bit too much, and you could probably turn them down a bit, but overall this was very nice!!! Well done.

Developer(+1)

Thank you for the feedback. 

Since this is only my first composition, I will strive to do even better next time. <3

Submitted

Super impressive for a first composition, you should be proud! I hope the feedback you have received from everyone helps you grow even more :D

Submitted(+1)

Sound good! I love the crystalic synth!

Submitted(+1)

You install a nice, apeasing vibe that goes well with the image theme (helped by the bubble and laugh sounds)! Nice subbmission!

Developer

Thank you <3

Submitted(+1)

Great use of percussion for your first composition. The little bleeps and bops added a lot to the atmosphere.

Developer

Thank you <3

Submitted(+1)

The story no one heard about - this is really good for a first composition already see someone already commented on the mix, which just needs a tad bit more balancing but still good stuff you wrote down here!

Developer

Thank you very much, 

yes, it was a bit tight.  lol

I don't know how to do mastering yet, but I think I'll try it. Thanks. <3

Submitted(+1)

Good work, can't wait to see what you'll do in the futur, you have the idea and the talent to do fantastic pieces !

Developer

Thank you very much <3

even though there's no mastering, I also want to see myself in the future ~(=Q=)~

Submitted(+1)

Very unique and dynamic track, definitely twisted the way I approached this composition after I read the lore.  
For a first time, this is a great start!  You had a lot of theatrical exploration for the story at hand.  I wish you luck on your composer journey.  

Developer

Thank you so much <3

~(*//////*)~ i appreciate it

Submitted(+1)

This is cool! Drums are super punchy and they don't step in the way of anything. I think a thing that would really round it off would be some kind of pad sound in the background, maybe some strings or a synth.

Submitted(+1)

This is super pretty! Well executed and the lore you have is hard on the feels.

Great job, and as a beginner, I support you too :)

Submitted(+1)

Its a really nice soundscape sort of deal. I appreciate the use of noises beyond musical instruments, makes it stand out here.

Developer

Thank you, this is my first time sooo... i appreciate it <3

Submitted(+1)

Oh my! I already told you, but for a first time, you did well! 😀 Just need some mastering here and mixing there, and you will get used to it with time. Anyway, great work! ❤

Developer

I know, I know, .. :p 

 I appreciate the encouragement thank you...

 anyway, yours is amazing :p

keep going broooo <3