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A jam submission

LoriView game page

Help Lori become real!
Submitted by Spotted_Leaf, october_stereo (@october_stereo) — 16 hours, 36 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Game Design#194.0974.097
Audio#313.9523.952
Overall#373.8603.860
Fun#463.8713.871
Innovation#1043.6943.694
Graphics#1324.0654.065
Theme#3033.4843.484

Ranked from 62 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How does you game fit the theme?
Lori, the main character, is on a journey to become real, but in order to achieve her goal she has to get metaphysical and phase through walls!

Did you write all the code and made all the assets from scratch?
Yes! Except the free-to-use font.

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Submitted (2 edits) (+2)

This was a really great little experience - the platforming felt really nice. The controls were really smooth and allowed you to provide a few challenges that required tricky manoeuvres that didn't feel frustrating or unfair. It played like a professional platform game and the puzzles were well constructed. The art work was fantastic too - I thought the ghost phasing power looked and felt really nice to use.

Your choice of music and sfx were enjoyable too. It felt quite calming and contrasted quite well with some of the difficulty of the later levels. I got a Final Fantasy / Breath of Fire vibe from the soundtrack.

You should expand this into a longer game with a narrative - it's got some real potential!

Submitted(+2)

Very well done game, i really liked the mechanics and challenging stuff!

Submitted(+2)

Great platformer and super interesting for me! It's really fun though I died a lot. But I have one point about death. Sometimes I don't know how died. The collider, the timer, or something else. I do hope the rule would be more clear! And It's still fun for me. Thanks for your work!

Submitted(+2)

It's a gem! It's really fun. A lot of nice things to say but too less time for me. I loved the graphics, audio and mechanics. Atmosphere is so nice. So much potential to grow this into something. Thank you for your work!

Submitted

nice game i rated

please play my game too

Submitted

Rated!, what an enjoyable game!, controls could be more snappy tho, but overall a really great effort making this game, good job :D!

also, will you help rate mine too?, I really appreciate every single one! Thanks! XD
https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-7/rate/1415313

Submitted(+2)

This game was amazing. The graphics and audio were great, especially for a jam game, and each level was fun to play. 5 stars across the board. I cant wait to see this as a full release!

Submitted(+2)

I enjoyed the mechanics and the gameplay it was a pretty enjoyable experience. Great work!

Submitted(+2)

Pretty cool mechanics, would like to see this made into a full game.

Submitted(+2)

Loved it! Really cool mechanic you brought into this game - the level design was well made around the shifting ability - it felt good! The art and music suited the game very well too! Great work!!

I think you'd like what I made too - would love to hear what you think!

Submitted(+2)

I'm a sucker for chromatic aberration, so I'm gonna like this game no matter what. But this is a very cool game, the character design is great, the music is great, it all comes together very nicely. My one complaint is the controls could've been a little tighter, the inertia kept killing me. I couldn't get past the level with the 3 small spiky vertical platforms. But this is a very polished game, good job!

Submitted (1 edit) (+2)

absolutely amazing. had so much fun and i wish it had more levels,  it was very satisfying phasing through the levels, very good game ^^

Submitted(+2)

Really cool game! I'd say the movement is a bit slippery and the walljump is a bit finnicky, but other than that, great entry!

Submitted(+2)

Reminds me of celeste, and I'm a big fan. Really enjoyed the game, had me hooked for a long time. Great level design as well. One of the better games I've seen this jam :D 

Submitted(+2)

It was great

Submitted(+2)

Aaaaaaannnnd that's a 5/5/5/5/5/5 ! That's a really, really, REALLY good game (please, note that when I say something in uppercase and bold, that's important =p). I love the Celeste-like aspect, with a clever concept that is simple to understand but allows a lot of possibilities (and it perfectly fits the theme too).

The movement is smooth, the game was hard but never unfair, the graphics are on point and the music is really good (the music style you chose isn't what I would have imagined for this game, it has a more a "Mario-Kart" vibe to it, but the quality is undeniable). Maybe you would need to tweak a bit the inertia of the character and the fall speed, but nothing too crazy.

I had a bug where I died and phased at the same time, resulting in a softlock, but since I could R, that was ok , it happens =).

In all seriousness, you have a concept. Like, really. I would love to see a more complete game on Steam, with more levels, mechanics and a story. If you decide to push that idea and release it on Steam, please, ping me, I'll be glad to buy a copy.

Thank you a lot for your game. I really enjoyed these 10-ish minutes of gameplay. It felt like my first minutes of games like Celeste or The Messenger, where I know that I'm playing something special, and it's really rare to feel that in a Game jam.

Keep up the good work !

Developer

Wow, thanks for the glowing review! I really appreciate it! 

Submitted(+2)

The controls were hard to get down but damn that music was good. I liked how lori went into ghost mode, it looked and felt great. I had a hard time with the wall jumping, probably easier with a controller. Great job!

Submitted(+2)

This is not my kind of game, as it is too difficult for me. But i appreciate your idea. The phasing makes the level design quite interesting. And i like the pixel art. :)

Submitted(+2)

Excellent work! I know it's a small thing but the effects you've made for phasing felt really good - it really help an already-polished game feel even better.

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

Best game i played SO FAR the Simple art style the smooth movements the level design. im not sure what to say about the game other than AMAZING, ENGAGING and FUN.

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