I like the cute little ghost's animations. The ideas for using the crystals to complete the levels and the dialog with the NPCs are good. The platforming feels a bit slippery and the air movement makes some jumps a bit tricky. The camera also gave some trouble in some levels as it was hard to see what was ahead of you or below you in some areas. The crystals should probably be multi use rather than single use, as they were not obvious how to use each one of them and having to restart the level after spending your only crystal and being stuck in a hole was a bit frustrating. Some nice ideas here though that could definitely be refined. Nice work!

Neat little game you all made for the jam. Well done!

The game looks and feels pretty good, except for how the crystals work... There's just so little feedback on how each one works and little consistency on their timing. It would have been nice to have a mouse click or other input be used to activate the crystals instead of a timing, allowing players to have more control over their movement. Not to mention that the green crystal is easy to break a level with since it appears to break level collision. I got stuck inside the level the first time I used it lol. It would also be nice to have a UI counter for how many crystals you have. Dialogue was a little long and confusing just because of the two speakers. Having a single speaker or the speech bubble move with each speaker might make that more clear though.

I offer so many areas of improvement only because I REALLY like what you have done here. This is a cool take on a platformer and with some polish, you could be on to something. The game handled well outside of the crystals, the presentation was clean, and the design foundation is solid. I don't ever want to pressure a dev to continue working on a jam game post jam (jam games are great learning tools), but this is a really cool loop and I'd love to see what else you can do with it. Super cool game, y'all. Keep up the good work!

I like that you took the time to make dialogue for this. The 4th wall breaking bit was particularly hilarious.  The jumping and moving could use a little tuning, thought it felt too slippery and the camera was a bit too zoomed in to see where I'm going or where I'm falling. However I really liked the crystal abilities that gave you different methods of traversing the levels--err I mean dimensions. Nice game, nice art, I like the visual clarity of everything :)

This is a well made platformer. The controls were nice an tight. The jumps felt real good. Nice job. 

Cute platformer! Loved finding the NPCs and running through their dialogue. Really gave the game some personality. :)

enjoyed playing the game throughout,  also liked the dialogue. Good job!

Nice job! I  thought the world the game set up was really fun and the graphics looked nice. Good job on the GUI, especially. I thought the gameplay was fun with getting to find and use gems. The only troubles I had were with the jump and camera. On the 4th level it starts out with those one tile jumps you have to do up the wall, and with no coyote time  on the jump that part was pretty difficult. I also wished the camera followed the player a little more tightly. I thought the level design was really good, but the fact that most of the levels were vertical made the fact that camera was set so high on the player made me a little worried I  was going to fall in a bottomless pit or something as I was navigating my way down the levels. Aside from a couple small issues, though, this is an extremely solid entry. Well done!

This was a great little game! I really liked the dialogue, I think it had a good balance of cheekiness and instruction. Well done! :D

I had fun running around collecting souls in this! The jump mechanics are implemented well. I love the ghost's art! Good job on your entry :).

Good game everything works well, the only trouble i had was i wasted the crystal in the first level, maybe an option to get the crystal again as it is required to jump up, but only if you dont already have the crystal.

Cool little game. 

I loved the visual style and the joke about breaking the fourth wall. Although I thought that it was missing some spooky ambient background music. I saw in one of your comments below that you are going to update the game after the jam. That's great! I will defiantly play again

The platform jumping part of the mechanics was really smooth. Despite my fairly bad skills I got around to most places...

Great idea, love the little ghost. Dialogues were on point, especially the creepy pit flame guy, he's my fave :))

Congratulations on this game submission. It was fun to play. Sadly I was not able to help his brother.

Great and cute little entry!

I totally loved the ghost sprite, it was adorable. The different mechanics and the ways they were activated but also introduced was really well done! The controls were fast and responsive. All in all, a nice entry for the game jam, congratulations on your final product!

Im not normally a fan of pixel art games, but this games pixel art is very cool!

I love the way you used speech, having it in the background, which oddly doesn't come up too much

As a lover of pixel art I find it simple but really good! Good job!

Great way to introduce the story and mechanics. 

Nice design and gameplay!

Personally, I felt a little overloaded with the way to use the crystals, but liked the idea!

Great idea to have secrets in the game! Most os games don't have the time, but you integrated so well it was very nice to find them! And the story was excellent!