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A jam submission

GDKO 2023 Round 1 "Astral Plane"View game page

My submission for a unique level location.
Submitted by NUTT (@IAMNUTT3D) — 2 days, 19 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
How good is the art style?#24.7934.793
How unique is the location?#34.6554.655
Should this entry qualify for the next round?#64.5864.586
Would you want to see more levels of this game?#74.4144.414
Is this a well thought out level?#183.8283.828

Ranked from 29 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

Which game engine did you use?
Gdevelop

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Comments

Submitted(+1)

I like it its a grat entry. fun to play. good job

Developer

Thank you!

Submitted(+1)

Fantastic entry. I had a blast with this on stream and left a lot of feedback while playing if you want to watch the playback. Bottom line: awesome entry and can't wait to see more from you in future rounds.

Developer(+1)

Thank you! I watched the VOD and took some notes! I really appreciate the detailed feedback! 

Submitted(+1)

THIS WAS SO COOL! You're art style is outta this world! Im super excited to see any more levels that come from this game. I dont really have any suggestions as far as level design (Im not good at platformers) or art (your art is way better than mine).

Developer

Thank you! Just got done playing your level and really enjoyed it!

Submitted

THIS WAS SO COOL! You're art style is outta this world! Im super excited to see any more levels that come from this game. I dont really have any suggestions as far as level design (Im not good at platformers) or art (your art is way better than mine).

Submitted(+1)

The mechanics and controls are great, and I love the art style! In regards to the zoom, I personally liked the 2x zoom better.

Developer

Thank you for the feedback! 2x zoom seems to be the more liked option!

Submitted(+1)

Really amazing art in this! And the environment is super cool and eerie :D

Developer(+1)

Thank you!

Submitted(+1)

great looking art, super atmospheric scary location. the horror dimension! 

Developer

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

Submitted(+1)

Feels great to control, looks awesome and definitely a unique vibe to the location. I would like to see more!

Developer

Thank you!

Submitted(+1)

Really nice mechanics! I liked the sound effects that the left and right click made and just sat there making drum beats with the sounds lol! The movement was very fluid! Great job! Also, while the larger field of view is nice, i feel that having it closer to the player, like the default mode, makes it feel more immersive. Great job!

Developer

Haha the sounds were very last minute, I'm glad you enjoyed them! Thank you for the feedback!

Submitted(+1)

I love the artwork, really unique level. 

Developer

Thank you! I really enjoyed the art and atmosphere of your submission as well! Good luck! 

Submitted(+1)

This is sick! Very impressive artwork, I have to begin stalking you online!
Great mechanics and fighting skillset on the character as well, really enjoyed your focus on the world and leaving the player blank, along with your statement against damage etc. Thumbs up"

The colour palette adds so much to the creepy world, with the shading, animations and the dismembered Patrick... wow you sure went for it!

Developer(+1)

Thank you so much! I didn't even realize how much the big boy looked like Patrick and now I can't un-see it.

Submitted

i can't unsee that either help

Submitted(+1)

The art and setting for the game is really well done, loving the crystals coming towards the character as well as the enemies

Developer(+1)

Thanks! They were a challenge to pixel up!

Submitted(+1)

this is such a cool game! the animations and art are really great and I loved the atmosphere 

Developer

Thank you! 

Submitted (1 edit) (+1)

Excellent art! Love the animations and the small details like the swords on the ground. This could definitely sell in the asset store. Full marks from me!

As a big fan of parallax myself, I would recommend you hook it up to your camera position instead of your player position, and also make sure your layers consistently increase/decrease in brightness from front to back to sell the effect. Currently there are a few rocks that feel like they are the wrong distance away.

J is a good scale to keep the game at, you can zoom out to K if you ever have any big monuments you want the player to see.

Developer(+1)

Thank you for the feedback! I'll try fixing the parallax stuff for later rounds if possible. 

Submitted(+1)

Parallax effects are enjoyable

Developer

Thank you! 

Submitted(+1)

Very nice and well done graphics, you put the effort in for sure! Creepy, intriguing parallax world setting. Can’t help but wonder more about the looming eye.

oh and as requested, on preferred zoom level: actually nothing seemed to change when pressing j or k in the browser? Though after I collected all the coins, I did get a much more zoomed out view that showed the entire stage, maybe that’s what you mean initially (in which case, yes, highly prefer the zoomed in version, so I see all the good art!

Developer

Thank you for the feedback! Sorry the zoom thing wasn't working for you, I'll look into that! 

Submitted(+1)

Great art, this is really cool.

Developer

Thank you very much!

(+1)

Really like the art of this entry. It looks fantastic.

Developer

Thank you!