Hot intro good work.

For a first game jam, this is definitely not bad! The story was fun, although maybe a little text-heavy—I found myself clicking through it quickly after a while. Theme was in the game as was the color palette..check.

The platforming part was enjoyable, though the controls could use a bit more polish. The sound was good, but the shooting sound almost blew out my speakers—it was really loud! Self-made art was also nice.

Overall, a solid first game jam entry. Keep it up—nice work! 😊

Impressive game, especially since I've read it's your first jam. I liked the idea, The theme was captured very nicely as well. The designs were really good as well. The story although it needs some fixing is nice as well. However the things already mentioned are pulling the game down for me. No sound effects except gun shot from the second character and the dialog. No music. No enemies to fight as a monster and also I agree with someone who mentioned that visual response for hitting monster with a bullet would help. But despite that very impressive game. Good luck in the future jams, I'm pretty interested how will your projects improve over time.

I think you managed to capture the theme of this game jam very well. Good job.

One thing that threw me off was the loud bang sound of the gun. I was using my phones and RIP my ears.

I can see you're passionate about telling stories, so I hope you keep making them and I'm looking forward to what your games will look like in a year or two from now.

A good interesting game works, the plot is interesting, though I don't know English, so I didn't understand anything, well, shooting is fun, jumping is also fun, and that's all you need

Good job, i really liked the fire at the beginning. Platforming was a bit hard at times, and when i turned into the monster all humans were already dead i don't know if that was the intention ?

One tip for the platforming, if you let a player turn around don't move him right away i had often that i fall of a platform just because i wanted to change the direction i was facing

But i do like your interpretation the theme, well done

When the game started, I wasn't expecting the screen to be filled with fire, it was a good intro to the game. The platforming is a bit difficult due to the implementation of the movement, it might be the fast speed combined with the small platforms, making it easy to fall off of them. Some visual feedback when an enemy is hit by a bullet would add a lot to the combat. The enemy design was great. Congratulations on your first game jam, great work!

I see this is your first game jam. Everything is fully functional gameplay wise, and there are even somewhat elaborate death animations. I'm impressed with how well the mechanics work overall. I did not run into any bugs. The level should have been a bit less flat to force the player to kill the monsters, however.

The opening level looks incredible with the fires. Hearing you made them yourself, I gotta give you a major thumbs up. The second level impressed me less. Perhaps if it was in a sunset it would feel tonally consistent with the first level.

My big complaint other than the lack of sound is the story. The perspective switching itself is relevant and you adhered to the limited palette, so it's a pass overall thematically. However, the script very much feels like a first draft with things like grammatical errors or how the overreliance on exposition.

I'm sure given a longer development cycle, the dialogue could have been touched up. Understandably, there wasn't much time to make it but I see the vision of what you were going for. Kudos.

Very cool idea and I liked the gameplay and art however I am able to just skip the whole level by running on the ground but otherwise great game

Interesting history and funny gameplay, I like so much the monster's design.  Some parts of the map feels empty, that's my unique complaint.