This was so poetic and beautiful. The story is simple but very evocative and let's the mind wander. The simplicity of the melodies represent this perfectly and are beautifully accompanied by intertwining harmonisations which elevate the whole OST. The chord progressions are beautifully crafted and perfectly embody the feeling of each track (I'm thinking of the ascending chords in "Soaring in Purple Skies" for example). 

The mix is also very intriguing, I might be wrong but I thing there is some pretty heavy saturation on the keys at some points which gives it a slightly vintage feel that I loved. Also the bass synth in"The Magic Music Box" is beautifully full and rounded but still leaves places to the high pitched plucks which I felt represented pretty well the powerful Djinny welcoming Lily in his sky domain. All in all this was a fantastic entry!

very well done. great use of the piano. the whole project felt calm and collective. the drums on the fourth track was a surprise at first but the groove caught on and felt fitting to me. the use of strings throughout the project were great in my opinion too. great work on this.

Nice use of piano and reverb! I think they convey the mood exactly as you intended. The whole soundtrack sounds like you are in a magical journey under the moon - a journey of self-discovery.

I was surprised when the drum beats came up in Chapter 3. Is that intended to portray the Djinny? It sounds catchy and seems to imply Djinny's personality as happy-go-lucky.

Yo... no kidding "the magic music box" is my favorite track so far from this entire jam. I'm not proficient with music theory or anything but it feels kinda jazzy-funky to me. I think it sounds kinda romantic or so, it does make me feel very relaxed as well, listening to it made me happy. That song really stood out for me but the rest are also good, have nice progressions, sound beautiful, and fit well together. The piano parts are all sooo good as well. Really hope this makes it in the top 5 cause it deserves it imo

Great job! Every track is so neat and polish and a perfect environment for a mystical world.

These songs are all so good! Right from the opening phrase followed by the nostalgic zelda-adjacent piano melody I was captured in this story. The music is so soothing and pensive that I ended up just leading against my hand and closing my eyes until The Magic Music Box lifted me out of it. And the opening of that song has to be my favorite moment! Lastly, great job ending with a return of the main nostalgic melody with the uplifting orchestration. It was incredibly satisfying! Loved it :)

Wish Upon a Star: The sea ambience noises add a lot to the track with the sound of waves and the bubbling water noises. This melody is also very well-crafted and suits a main theme extremely well. This piece sounds like a lullaby almost and is very calm, fitting a title screen for a game very well.

Contemplate: I love the sparseness of the instrumentation. This makes me imagine big open space like the sky or the ocean. The continuation of the ambience is a great stylistic choice to help the OST flow. The chords you chose add a feeling of curiosity to the track that mirror’s the main character’s wonder perfectly! I think that the building of the instruments (especially the bass) is a cool choice that doesn’t necessarily indicate rising danger, but hints that feelings or questions are getting stronger/bigger.

Soared in Purple Skies: The piano rolls and the space between them is very relaxing. The sweeping synth that enters at about a minute into the song fits the soaring vibe very well and I think this is the point that I start to sense a transition from more water-like ambience to air-like ambience. The piano, strings, and glockenspiel all work really well together to continue the momentum forward at the end even though the resolution keeps getting danced around until the very end.

The Magic Music Box: The arpeggios at the beginning are so magical. The bass and drums with mallets paint a really cool picture of the Djinny and adds a feeling of levity and relaxed energy that hasn’t been felt in your OST yet. Your overall song structure is fantastic with an intro and related outro and the deaccelerando leading into the outro.

Dor: This track conveys wistfulness very well. You do a great job of capturing the spacey-ness of her descent from the heavens as well. I LOVE the return of the main motif in the simple piano melody. Then the build with the strings is heart-wrenching! The build-up to the brassy end is also very magical and ends with such a satisfying conclusion. Excellent work and thank you for sharing!

The beginning of the first track is very nice, the gentleness of it and the higher melody really do give the impression of what the title suggests, wishing upon a star. I like how it starts out really piano driven but then at the end it’s these bells, the transition happens so smoothly.

My favorite song has to be the fourth one though, I love the part when the beats join in and the playful feel the song gives, it matches perfectly with the story you described :)

The last track is a nice touch too! It feels so bittersweet.

What a lovely intro in Wish Upon A Star ! it really sets the vibe to the game in a gentle way.
The "thème d'accord"' in Contemplate personally gave me a hint of Debussy, an ooh moment XD 
Lovely progression by 3rd in Soaring In Purple Skies, which illustrates perfectly the flying(nice touch with the gliss at the end!)
And then a pleasant surprise of the drum track in The Magic Music Box, it brings some diversity to the soundtrack while staying completely coherent.
Nice transition for Dor, which sounds like a nice recapitulation of the game with a very satisfactory ending. 

I can really see the attention you brought in the orchestration and the construction of the soundtrack, great job!!

I think my favorite is The Magic Music Box, but this whole OST is beautiful and atmospheric, which is perfect for a visual novel. Really good work, and I love the story line you have as well!

This is great!  I feel like your sense of pacing in these tracks is your biggest strength - from the chord progressions, to the melodies, to the overall weight of the instrumentation at any given moment, it feels like you're being brought on a journey through the tracks instead of just casually listening.  I feel like you really nailed the theme with the combination of the pianos, bells (+ music box?), long string notes, and then those very lightly distorted sounding plucks.  After the first few calm songs, magic music box is really really fun, with it's super satisfying groove going along with instruments reminiscent to the rest of the soundtrack.  All in all, great stuff!  good work on this.

This is just so pretty. Your music fits the theme 100% and makes me think of a classical movie soundtrack for a Hollywood musical, with the gentle piano, the sweeping strings and the dream-like arpeggios. I also really liked the addition of the synthy bass and electronic percussion in The Magic Music Box, if fits very well. Everything just flows. Such lovely work! Great entry. <3

Wish Upon a Star had a really fascinating start, and I can tell already that this will be a really cool track just by the subtle, interesting audio effects. This is a beautiful, lilting, simple melody-- enjoyed the harp countermelody. Great start, definitely establishes a serene mood for the rest of the soundtrack.

Contemplate starts sparsely-- good move here, as every track doesn't need to be overloaded with instruments.

Soared in Purple skies felt improvisatory and free-- I quite liked it. This was the most varied of the tracks so far. Beautiful modulations and chords, and cool synths! You can feel the moment where she begins to fly away-- magical!

Lovely change of pace at The Music Box! I enjoy how, despite the upbeat tempo, the track remains relaxed and chill.

Dor has such lovely, interesting chords in the beginning: I've noticed all throughout that you use directionality in your music to indicate rising, falling, etc. This track had some iffy harmonies at one point early on, but this was brief. The return of the opening theme was a tender moment-- things like these help music sound more heartfelt.

Overall, this was a lovely soundtrack that perfectly channeled the chill, starry vibes of the jam :) nice job!

Loved it! Composition and comtabality between the pieces are amazing. Great job. 

Wish upon a star - Simple, pretty, and catchy theme, developed in separate instruments. Very nicely done!

Contemplate - this is very soothing and dreamy, made me somewhat sleepy.

Soared in Purple Skies - I love the harmonies in this one, and the arpeggios are glorious!

Magic Music Box - ha, did not expect that beat. Very different from the rest but fits in so well! really neat harmonies here, too. This is my favorite.

Dor - Very glad to hear the title theme again here, and the fanfares at the end, the best conclusion I could have hoped for!

What a magical soundtrack, excellent job!

This is really good! The composition is amazing, The Magic Music Box is such a groove. There are times where the mix suffers a bit and feels too bass heavy/muddy, but your skill at composing more than makes up for it in my opinion. Good job!

Love these chord choices in all these tracks! Fantastic composition in all these tracks, and along with the instrumentation it matches the theme extremely well. Amazing work, this is perfect. The fourth track is my favorite for sure!

Really loving the breath of the wild vibes coming from this, but the twist you put on that formula in the 4th track also goes hard. The world you've created here feels very immersive and fleshed out, as abstract as it is, and every swell of the music feels as though it lines up beat-for-beat with the short poems that correspond to it. I would totally play this game if it existed.

Nice work! I love the story you made for your visual novel. The music fits it well!