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A jam submission

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Submitted by Joszs โ€” 2 days, 20 hours before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Is the story enjoyable?#14.5004.500
Is the storytelling well integrated into the game?#14.6884.688
Was the game fun?#14.3754.375
Is the narrative clear?#14.7504.750
Overall#14.5634.563
Does the environment contribute to the Story?#34.5004.500

Ranked from 16 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

What are you pronouns so I know how to refer to you in the video?
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Comments

Submitted

Really enjoyed this, sorry did not get there during voting. Really fun and good story telling, I totally enjoyed this :)

Submitted

Ok this is just EXCELLENT ! Everything is well made and the idea is really cool and original. Congrats !

Submitted

Yup, this was the only entry Iโ€™ve so-far give 5-stars all down the board (sorry for any spoilers on my ratings for anyone else XD).

Great โ€œbaba is youโ€ riff and the right amount of puzzling and backtracking, plus it was just fun. Boss was a slight challenge, but not crazy or too frustrating. Honestly, just great all around. Well done.

Submitted

Also, I feel like lorem ipsum was a low-key rickroll, but I appreciate it haha

Developer

Thanks for the kind words! Omg, why did I not think of that, I should have put the lyrics of 'Never gonna give you up' as the description ๐Ÿคฃ

Submitted

All 5 stars! Yup, that's a dang fine game. I also missed the sword and got frustrated, but happily the comments below helped me figure it out. Huge plus for me with the clever name of the game, etc. Clever clever.

Submitted

Well there goes all 5 stars my friend! This was a great game that you can follow the story easily and the environment was fun to go through! Good job!

Submitted

So cool what you've made! It fits your style perfectly and the game has such a nice depth to it!
I especially enjoyed how you changed even the description and your own links to this _______ ______ _______ format. Genius idea, amazing game!

Submitted(+1)

I really like this game playing inside the story. No notes, really well done. 

Submitted

The story is really enjoyable and well explained, so it is pretty clear. I love the gameplay, it's very original and fun, I like how every item had a different use. And the bossfight is very well designed, incorporating all the mechanics learned in the levels. The artstyle is really nice, I like how the whole game takes place on a scroll. Great entry, it fits the task perfectly!

Submitted

Super fun and cute little game! I love the art and the overall aesthetic. I missed the sword the first time through and it took me a minute before I went back to grab it, maybe some effect or sign to let the player know they need to get it would be nice. Otherwise, great level design and good job overall!

Submitted

Excellent and adorable game. You really nailed the task for this round perfectly. Great story from start to finish.

 

One small thing is that it was not clear to me that I had to pick up the first sword. I got a bit frustrated and almost quit. Once I figured it out it was a joy to play.

Submitted

Super solid entry!  I like that the story itself was the level.  It worked out really well.  I did get a little confused with realizing I could actually go pick up the sword but I feel like it wasn't too bad to figure out.  Great job!

Submitted(+1)

I had a good time completing the game and uncovering the story as I progressed. The gameplay is great and the game intuitively communicates what to do without any instructions anywhere, a truly impressive feat

Submitted(+1)

I absolutely love the way you dismissed all the language from your submission. Title, the font on the submission page, even for pronouns ๐Ÿ˜‚
And still kept it so clear and enjoyable. 

Submitted(+1)

Such an enjoyable experience! well done