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A jam submission

The Adventures of FlatrickView game page

A line segment named Flatrick goes on an amazing journey into two dimensions.
Submitted by jennadamscodes — 6 minutes, 27 seconds before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Story#134.2214.221
Theme#174.4714.471
Fun#2743.2943.294
Aesthetics#2813.4563.456
Mechanics#4462.7942.794
Sound#7481.2501.250
Music#7571.2941.294

Ranked from 68 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How many people worked on this game total?
1

Did you use any existing assets? If so, list them below.
no

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Submitted

I was ready for it to go 3d! 

Submitted

Short game but I thought the story was really nice. I was excited to see where it went next. Cool game

Submitted

Interesting concept. Looking forward to further development to see where Flatrick ends up!

Submitted

It was interesting to follow game plot, too sad that it's ended so abruptly. But we all know how jams usually go, I bet you'll make it even more interesting in future time.

Submitted

Quirky and fun, I hope you do more like this.

Submitted

Short and cute, more content would be nice, and music and SFX could’ve been great, but the story was amazing; it has its own charm. I’m looking forward to part 2! Good job! :D

Submitted

Great aesthetics - i really appreciate all the effects you incorporated into this little story. Really fits the theme nicely as well. It was fun and I look forward to 'part 2'. Great job.

Submitted

Absolutely loved the way you approached the theme! The way you taught the game mechanics was also very easy to understand without being overloaded with information. You could definitely develop this into a very fun platformer in the future. Good job!

Submitted

sound would have been jelly in peanut butter

Submitted

I didn't expect to be attached to a 1D being, go up and beyond Flatrick!

Will you be expanding the game? More levels and dimensions? What adventures can we expect from Flatric? Will he rename himself to Squaric? In time Cubric?

Submitted

i can see the potential but it would be better to include a bit more 

Submitted

Really imaginative game! Would be much nicer with some sound and a bit more content. However it already has a great story.

Submitted

I wasn't expecting to care about a line today! Great idea for the theme. Couldn't help but read it in a Stanley Parable narrator style voice in my head!

Submitted

What a nice narrative game. Really cool interpretation of the theme. Loved it ;)

Now I need to know what happened next to Flatrick...or rather Poligonatrick?

Submitted

Loved the narration :)

Submitted

The story got me invested in the line. 😝

Submitted

This could be a great story to expand on, good job!

Submitted

Very cute story telling! Big Thomas Was Alone vibes. :)

Am I a bad person for purposefully bumping into other lines after being told it was impolite? Probably...

I do hope you continue this after the jam, I'd like to see where it goes!

Developer(+1)

You're not a bad person, it's fun to make the little grawlix pop up. :-P

Thanks for taking the time to play! I do hope to continue working on it.

Submitted

Wow that is a game I did not expect - nice work.
While wandering beyond the line I already feared that I missed something but the portal was a nice idea - if you expand on it you should maybe dial in the controlls of the platmorming part - it felt very floaty
and yes some nice music would be awesome with that - something as simple as your art style would work well I think well done

Submitted

Lovely story and very interesting take on the theme. A good example of "less is more". With some sound and music it could be even better.

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