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A jam submission

The Last Sun RiseView game page

2D visual novel of the calm before the storm
Submitted by Apollo1313, BunnyGirlSenpai (@MonetWrites) — 1 hour, 6 minutes before the deadline
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Results

CriteriaRankScore*Raw Score
Graphics#4563.3563.356
Audio#4953.0333.033
Theme#5103.0673.067
Overall#6842.8302.830
Game Design#7502.7332.733
Innovation#7882.5222.522
Fun#9452.2672.267

Ranked from 90 ratings. Score is adjusted from raw score by the median number of ratings per game in the jam.

How does your game fit the theme?
The game takes place in a time of peace in a kingdom about to be set to war once the game is over war is set upon the kingdom breaking the calm before the storm.

Did you write all the code and made all the assets from scratch?
All code was written from scratch but art, music and ui assets where not

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Submitted(+1)

nice story, would have loved to skip the text animation, i tried but it just went to the next part of the text which made it a bit slow. Art is looking good also :)

Submitted(+1)

Cool idea, as a person who also had a writer on their game ,it might be a good idea to consider playtesting as i felt that there was a lot of filler and i would have prefered more people to talk to with less to say.

nice story though and charecter dynamics.

would you mind rating mine?

https://itch.io/jam/brackeys-12/rate/2972467

Submitted(+1)

Cool, the dialog should be a little faster or show more text

Submitted(+1)

I wasn't able to finish it but I am not the biggest visual novel fan. I think it does deserve quite some recognition though!

Submitted(+1)

Nice art and music. The text speech is a little annoying, I think after one continue button hit it should show all text before show the next dialogue. Nice game <3

Submitted(+1)

Cool game! I think a bit less dialogue would be good, but still, great job!

Submitted(+1)

Cool game! The texts are a bit slow, but I liked the music and overall audio management. Of course, story is a good read. This is well put together.

Well done. Cheers!

Submitted(+1)

Loved the pixel art and the story was a nice read, good job on this one!

Submitted(+1)

A good start to a story driven game, the only issue I had is not everything was pixel art which clashed a bit and the text is super slow (Im a stupidly fast reader)

10/10 would accept a sus request from a big blacksmith again

Developer

Thanks for the feed back, yeah so is the issues of using free assets is why every thing isn't the same. Also hindsight is 20/20 and I will take the advice on the typewriting into the future and have the option to skip the typewriting and give the option to have the text appear instantly when you click a button!!! 

(+1)

The pixel art is really nice in this game! It adds a lot to the overall vibe and helps immerse you in the story. Great job!

Submitted(+1)

nice pixel art 

Submitted(+1)

Nice graphics and music! The story also, just the typewriting was a bit slow for me

GJ

Developer (1 edit) (+1)

yeah it skipped my mind during the jam that I should have made a way to skip the typewriting will take that into account next time 

Submitted(+1)

Loved the graphics!

Submitted(+1)

Really like the sound of the writing. Story was really nice and interesting. Fun take on the theme.

(+1)

blacksmith request to king sus imo

Submitted(+1)

Nice visuals!

Good job! :D

Submitted(+1)

Interesting take on the theme. I has the look and feel of an action platformer but turns it around into visual novel territory! Nice surprise. Well done! Love the pixel art cover image too

Submitted(+1)

Cool concept, the gameplay was just characters interacting but somehow it makes sense considering the theme. Good job and keep making games!

Submitted(+1)

Great job on the jam! Don't see a lot of narrative focused games here, so it was a nice change of pace :) Small suggestion/criticism: if you're going to make premade assets, try to make sure they blend well together. Specifically, the characters and world is pixel art, but the background for conversations are high res, and the font doesn't match with either. Just a thought. Good job again, cheers!

Developer

thanks yeah assets for free are hard to find hard to fit 100% together, thanks again for the feed back will try finding assets that fit better next time.

Submitted(+1)

Nice little VN, I really liked the concept and how it ties with the theme!

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