I really like Fels portrait and room art. Did you do them?
The Environment models are nice though I think the lighting needs to be tweaked. In the apartment specifically there was some heavy artifacting. The outlines for a few objects are a little too thick too. Pic below should show you what I mean about the artifacting. Notice how the shadows by the bed appear fuzzy?
Doing "Talk" -> "Need Anything ?" in the apartment repeats the same line about 3 times but I think this has to do with all dialogue responses playing all at once. Some of the dialogue has grammar errors so I highly recommend getting another pair of eyes to proofread it during development.
Has a lot of potential if the story is interesting. Definitely a game I'll be keeping an eye on.